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shayna611 in runaway_tales

Pocky Sundae 9/30

Apr 08, 2013 22:06

Acerola #9. Watching Paint Dry with Hot Fudge, Whipped Cream, and Pocky
Story : knights & necromancers
Rating : PG
Word Count : 100

This prompt really should have been Kairn torture, but I promised myself I would explore new plotty options with all 30 pocky, so it's not.

( instead it's Kairn painting on Reida )

[topping] whipped cream, [extra] pocky, [challenge] acerola, [topping] hot fudge, [author] shayna

Comments 6

roisin_farrell April 9 2013, 03:38:44 UTC

Oh wow. So much is said in 100 words. I know Reida didn't have it easy but this really illustrates that.

shayna611 April 9 2013, 16:38:25 UTC

thanks :)

ichthusfish April 9 2013, 04:15:51 UTC

Wow. That one had quite a punch to it. Never expected that. Nice work in such a few words.

shayna611 April 9 2013, 16:38:36 UTC

thanks :)

hi_falootin April 10 2013, 23:11:58 UTC

and Reida isn't all that happy with Kairn knowing either, but I guess that cat is out of the bag there! I wonder if Sethan's aware of what's going on with Ephram at all (at any point)...he's certainly smart enough to pick up on it if he was paying attention, but why would he be paying attention?

(Of course now this is making me think of Ephram's final moments in the girl-Kairn AU)

I'm curious about the plottiness connected to this! Is this more than the usual abuse?

shayna611 April 10 2013, 23:20:38 UTC

Reida hopes Kairn won't understand the forms he's copying for her and won't ask too many questions.

I'm not really sure how much Sethan knows about the whole Ephram business and I don't think he's terribly concerned anyway.

And yes, there's something specific I'd like to build something out of.

thanks :)