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Libra Moon

Jun 26, 2012 10:56

Title: Libra Moon

Author: Amata le Fay

Story: Force-Benders

Flavor(s): Chocolate Chip Mint 10 (luminous), Peach Pie 10 (the star of the North)

Toppings: None

Extras: Fresh Peaches

Rating: PG

Word Count: 254

Notes: Amalia is one of nine teenagers who has been transported from her home on Earth to another dimension known as Andromeda. Concrit welcome.

( The stars were different in Andromeda. )

[author] amata le fay, [challenge] chocolate chip mint, [extra] fresh fruit : peaches, [challenge] peach pie

Comments 3

ichthusfish June 27 2012, 03:41:22 UTC

Interesting twist on how she views her stars. How does he react to the kiss? Does he even notice? I like the little descriptions of the skies and the differences. Nicely done :)

amatalefay June 27 2012, 17:30:04 UTC

I sort of envisioned that he was asleep at the time... their "official" first kiss comes later in the year. Thanks for reading!

nothingtoregret June 27 2012, 14:22:58 UTC

The description of the sky is beautiful, I can imagine it very clearly. A very cute ending too, you go for it Amalia! :)