LJ Idol Week 13: Open Topic

[rswndrlst]

Baby This Will Only End In Tragedy

You meet me in the park at midnight and in the darkness when we see the stars you say, “See. I told you that they were there all along.” But the skeptic in me tells you, “You only see them because you want to, because you have been told to.”

When you left, I used to pile the extra pillows next to me on the bed

Comments

[roina_arwen]

Minor typo here: See. I told you that (they) were there all along.

Otherwise I think this is wonderful and not overly angsty at all!

[rswndrlst]

Thank you Ro! you rock \m/

[kickthehobbit]

This is really lovely and I'd post it as-is.

[rswndrlst]

Thank you!!

I am officially submitted to the topic thread.

[mallorys_camera]

Beautifully written.

[rswndrlst]

thank you!

[eternal_ot]

Achingly Beautiful!!! lovely words..I couldn't resist but re-read to take the beauty in..Good work! Loved it!! Kudos!

[rswndrlst]

what an amazing compliment thank you!!

[kajel]

Lovely. Nicely done.