second chances are the best

[roughededged]

Title:second chances are the best
Author: roughededged
Pairing: Chiitaro/ Yamachii
Summary: one date, a second chance
AN: Thanks to my life saver super_color who helped me when i was so stuck in the ending.

Comments

[super_color]

wha!!!!

SUPER CUTE!!!

XD!!!

GOOD JOB!!!

[roughededged]

and that was epicly fast
ya go to sleep :)

[super_color]

OMG!!!
you've kept me up longer than YOKO has! lol
all because I was waiting to comment epicly fast :D

[roughededged]

lol, it's cause i'm more special than YOKO, jk :P
and i now, and you succeeded

[aliciaswr]

<3 Ouch. Ryu shall be in Chii's heart in time to come!

Thanks for writing!

[roughededged]

yes he shall :)
Thanks for reading

[lovetoosweet]

*dies*
Proper comment on the way.

[roughededged]

Eh? Don't die.. Are you alright, lol

[lovetoosweet]

*gets revived*
I need to be alive to comment, right? :3

He had hoped that the date would be wonderful and that by the end of the date Chinen would have fallen in love with him too.
When I was reading this, there was this warm fuzzy feeling. But everyone knows that one date wouldn't be able to cure anything.

Everywhere Ryutaro would take him, Chinen would tell him a story of how his ex-boyfriend Yamada would take him to the same place.
I would have killed Chinen if he wasn't half of Chiitaro D<

When Chinen asked him if he wanted to stay a little while and have coffee, Ryutaro politely declined.
*grips chest* HURT HURT HURT T__________________T

It was pretty obvious that Chinen wasn’t over his ex-boyfriend and Ryutaro didn’t have the strength to compete with a memory.
Ah, the hardest thing to do is to compete with something that isn't even alive, like a memory because memory does not do anything to compete with you yet they win.

He wondered if he did, or said something wrong during the date.
Yes you did.

When Ryutaro had first

[roughededged]

Okay I'm back from school :)
first, I'm glad your alive :)

at first I wanted it to be a sweet fic but then ended up like this

and noooo, chiitaro needs chinen

and ya, he had to decline, he was already hurting

memories are very hard to compete with

and yes chii did something very wrong, he just hadn't realised it

yup, he was going to decline but he couldn't say no

lol, ya, yuto and yamada could be on a date *wink*

lastly, sequel? Who knows? I was talking to my friend about it, but I'm not sure if I should.

Lol, I'm not much of an angst person so I don't know how I wrote this. I like my happy endings :)

[shigefan1992]

Awwww Cute!

I thought it was really sweet =D

[roughededged]

Thanks :)