second chances are the best

Oct 11, 2010 23:08

Title:second chances are the best
Author: roughededged
Pairing: Chiitaro/ Yamachii
Summary: one date, a second chance
AN: Thanks to my life saver super_color who helped me when i was so stuck in the ending.

second chances are the best )

t: one-shot, f: hsj, p: chinen yuri/ morimoto ryutaro

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lovetoosweet October 12 2010, 23:05:01 UTC
*gets revived*
I need to be alive to comment, right? :3

He had hoped that the date would be wonderful and that by the end of the date Chinen would have fallen in love with him too.
When I was reading this, there was this warm fuzzy feeling. But everyone knows that one date wouldn't be able to cure anything.

Everywhere Ryutaro would take him, Chinen would tell him a story of how his ex-boyfriend Yamada would take him to the same place.
I would have killed Chinen if he wasn't half of Chiitaro D<

When Chinen asked him if he wanted to stay a little while and have coffee, Ryutaro politely declined.
*grips chest* HURT HURT HURT T__________________T

It was pretty obvious that Chinen wasn’t over his ex-boyfriend and Ryutaro didn’t have the strength to compete with a memory.
Ah, the hardest thing to do is to compete with something that isn't even alive, like a memory because memory does not do anything to compete with you yet they win.

He wondered if he did, or said something wrong during the date.
Yes you did.

When Ryutaro had first asked him out on a date, Chinen wanted to really say no, but ended up saying yes.
WTH?!? YOU CONSIDERED DECLINING RYUTARO MDLHFWOBF???

But as their date progressed, Chinen felt himself having a great time. Honestly speaking, he hadn’t felt as happy as he did in a long time. But now he really wondered why Ryutaro hasn’t called him.
Well Chinen, you were talking about Yamada all the time, I wonder when you had the time to have a great time during your date. And Ryutaro hadn't called you since he thinks you're not yet over Yamada who, btw, is on a date with Yuto.

Ryutaro just smiled back and started walking alongside Chinen. Maybe Chinen wasn’t over his ex-boyfriend just yet. But Ryutaro hoped that in the near future he could be the one in Chinen’s heart.
THIS SCREAMS A SEQUEL! :D

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY THANK YOU FOR THE CHIITARO ANGST <3

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roughededged October 13 2010, 01:05:10 UTC
Okay I'm back from school :)
first, I'm glad your alive :)

at first I wanted it to be a sweet fic but then ended up like this

and noooo, chiitaro needs chinen

and ya, he had to decline, he was already hurting

memories are very hard to compete with

and yes chii did something very wrong, he just hadn't realised it

yup, he was going to decline but he couldn't say no

lol, ya, yuto and yamada could be on a date *wink*

lastly, sequel? Who knows? I was talking to my friend about it, but I'm not sure if I should.

Lol, I'm not much of an angst person so I don't know how I wrote this. I like my happy endings :)

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lovetoosweet October 13 2010, 01:15:12 UTC
I'm alive 'cause I need my Chiitaro <3

Angst is very much love. I AM NOT COMPLAINING ONE BIT :D

Yes, so I will stop myself from strangling the boy.

Poor baby T^T

They are, because they're in the past and they still win.

So we can kill him now? *shot*

YES THEY ARE THEY ARE THEY ARE 8DDDDDD

SEQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEL! YOU CANNOT JUST LET RYUTARO DROWN IN MISERY AND JUST HOPING CHINEN WILL LOVE HIM! DDDDD; Although without a sequel, this is already good :D

A sequel can have a happy ending :D *shotbrickedstoned*

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roughededged October 13 2010, 01:25:38 UTC
Lol, then it's the power of chiitaro keeping you alive? Lol

and please, don't strangle the poor boy or else we will have a very angry ryutaro ;p

yes, poor ryutaro, he needs a hug

lol, we are not killing anyone

and yes they are they are they are, who knows where but they are

ya, I know, sequel means happy ending. Maybe over the weekend?

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lovetoosweet October 13 2010, 04:18:57 UTC
YES :D It surely does <3333

...Oh, I forgot about that :3

*hands Chinen* There, go and hug each other.

T^T

YAYAYAY! <333

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roughededged October 13 2010, 04:26:29 UTC
good :)
if something would have happened to chinen, ryutaro would have been epicly mad at both of us
awww... Chiitaro hug :)

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lovetoosweet October 13 2010, 04:30:05 UTC
Yeah, we would have been killed T____T

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roughededged October 13 2010, 04:38:09 UTC
Yup, cause no one messes with an angry ryutaro

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lovetoosweet October 13 2010, 04:42:16 UTC
The kid is a brat after all.

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roughededged October 13 2010, 04:44:37 UTC
Exactly, imagine what he would to just to protect his chinen?? 0_O

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lovetoosweet October 13 2010, 04:49:02 UTC
OH MY GOSH I AM IN GRAVE DANGER T_________T
Ryutaro, I am terribly sorry for wanting to kill Chinen, he is all yours. Here. *hands Chinen* *locks them in a room*

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roughededged October 13 2010, 04:52:57 UTC
Don't lock them in a room, cause then we would need to watch out for yabumama :p

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lovetoosweet October 13 2010, 04:59:17 UTC
I'll throw away the keys so Yabumama won't be able to get it open.

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roughededged October 13 2010, 05:04:47 UTC
I'll help you get rid off the keys :D
we need chiitaro love :)
I don't know what's scarier, angry ryutaro or angry yabumama

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lovetoosweet October 13 2010, 05:38:38 UTC
We'll melt it XDDDD
YES WE DO 8D
...That's hard :|

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roughededged October 13 2010, 13:10:05 UTC
Ya, we shall melt it and then dissolve it :)
like that they will be stuck there forever and ever :)

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