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My Night (Chapter 02)

Feb 01, 2008 04:18

Title: My Night (Chapter 02)
Author: roseredqueen
Rating: G
Prompt Set: 100.1
Prompt: #033~Sarcasm
Word Count: 418
Summary: In the hospital wing, various Weasleys and Potters hurry to Rose's side and hurl blame.
Warnings: None
Notes: Chapter two of an ongoing fic, My Night, a Rose/Scorpius sory. Cut text comes from Train's "It's About You"

( This ain't about the things I've done/Where I've been or what I won. )

scorpius/rose, my night, potterverse, fanfiction

Comments 9

drcjsnider February 1 2008, 13:26:55 UTC

Very nice scorpius here... I especially like how you describe his anger and him falling into a chair like an offended sovereign.

roseredqueen February 1 2008, 18:06:22 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad you liked his characterization, even though we don't see much of it yet. :D

ginny112 February 1 2008, 18:07:56 UTC

I love your Scorpius. I think being Draco's son, he would be slightly like his father (I'm talking about his drawl). You portrayed him very well. I'm looking forward to more.

Ps. I've friended you. I hope you friend me back. :)

roseredqueen February 1 2008, 18:20:30 UTC

Thank you. In my mind, Scorpius is still a Malfoy, and has the same pride in his family, it's just...expressed differently. I'm glad you liked it.

I love friends! *friends*

j_a_lie February 1 2008, 21:40:01 UTC

Rose is in Slytherin? Oh, poor Ron, people are starting to like that idea (as in, yay, I'm not alone).

Offended sovereign :D I think the sarcasm works really well, too.

Albus's point of view is always a very nice thing to see. Though I really want to see more from his eyes.

Now, a bit of nitpick. How many cousins are actually there? Because Albus only shows a few of them, and I'd imagine a little more ruckus even if there are only the aforementioned people present.

roseredqueen February 1 2008, 23:41:13 UTC

I love Rose in Slytherin, it just suits my muse better. (Hee, no you're not.)

Thanks!

Well there are quite a few, but--Victoire is graduated, married and pregnant, James, Dominique, and Molly have graduated, and Fred and Roxanne are there, just quieter than Hugo and Louis. Does that clear it up at all?

j_a_lie February 2 2008, 00:38:03 UTC

Yes it does. Thank you.

roseredqueen February 2 2008, 04:26:13 UTC

Anytime!

pop_the_toaster February 15 2008, 20:28:08 UTC

i love it! and i can't wait for the next insallment. i love how you've got Rose in SLytherin (yay! something different for once!!) and how you've written Scorpius...it's nice to see more of Draco in him.
One little thing though...."which led to an interesting juxtaposition of their hair mingling, until you couldn’t tell where Rose ended and Lily began." I presume that Lily and Rose have the same colour hair...but it wouldn't be a juxtaposition, as that is talking about opposites mixing together.... don't mean to sound nit-picky, but that just jumped out at me...