My Night (Chapter 01)

[roseredqueen]

Title: My Night (Chapter 01)
Author: roseredqueen
Rating: G
Prompt Set: 100.1
Prompt: #079--Sickness
Word Count: 425
Summary: Rose Weasley feels ill and ignores it, causing some problems at Quidditch practice.
Warnings: None
Notes: Chapter One of an ongoing fic, My Night, a Rose/Scorpius. Cut text comes from a Dire Straits song, I know the grammar is bad.

Comments

[doctoraicha]

Very promising start. I loved the last paragraph in particular.

[roseredqueen]

Thank you very much, and thank you for pointing out about the cut text, I'm not changing my cross-postings to reflect the fact that the Dire Straits lyrics have bad grammar.

[doctoraicha]

No worries, and I don't blame you. I didn't realise they were lyrics, or I'd not have mentioned it.

[roseredqueen]

Yeah, but if it put you off other people might think the same. I feel better knowing and being able to clarify it.