Might as well go for a

CONCRIT POST

As I haven't done one yet. Haseo, and Shinpachi. You know what to do.

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In case they... take this as a chance to screw with me and add to my headaches.

If anyone sees a squat, ugly, annoying pig-version of me running around and... oinking at people, just... kick it. Into the nearest tree.

Actually, kick it a few times. Trust me, it deserves it.

[ Well, today is certainly going to be a good day. He can tell by the blood that keeps getting in his eyes and the headache he's got. He was on his way out of the building. That's all. He just wanted to go outside, but no. The doorway had to fall on him ( Read more... )

Raine, and his friends, I'm sorry but... Saku and Bo have both gone home. Their room is empty ( Read more... )

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I'm not... really used to taking care of people on a family level, let alone a little kid...

How would you... how do you comfort someone who feels like they're missing their other half?

[ Yes, it's dark. No, Haseo doesn't care. He hasn't been in the mood to call attention to himself -- not that he's ever really in the mood for much attention from everyone ( Read more... )

[ Someone's keeping his voice very low and quiet. This seems to be Luceti's favorite thing to do to him: Break his heart. He definitely sounds tired, right now, as he tries to mask the upset tone in his cracking voice. ]Anyone... anyone who knew Atoli ( Read more... )

It's strange... around this time, a few years ago, I was grabbing everywhere for power. I wanted to be stronger than everyone, for Shino. I thought 'The only thing I can do right now is be the most powerful. That's all that matters ( Read more... )

[ This is a very tired, depressed Haseo, sitting on the edge of the fountain. He's the perfect picture of someone who's not sure what to do with himself right now. Atoli's still kidnapped, and now, Luke's gone home. Having her missing is bad enough... but Luke was always a big part of the reason he was okay here ( Read more... )

It seems like there's a lot more kidnappings than usual. I haven't seen so many in a while. I guess it's a little hard to notice by numbers, right now, with the incoming New Feathers, but I keep hearing crashes over the journals.

And still, Atoli's not backAt least she won't be as lonely, with a lot of people heading in but... damn, what's the big ( Read more... )