[Fic] The Three Kisses - chapter 8

[rennie_88]

Title: The three kisses
Pairing(s): Everyone/Changmin
Length: Chaptered (8/?)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: drama, romance, angst

Summary: Someone’s writing Changmin love letters. How’s he supposed to identify his admirer when all four of his band mates seem like the one?

A/N: this chapter didn't originally exist, but got some lovely comments that changed my mind

Comments

[shunluv]

yayyyyyyyyyyyyy new chapter<3
comment later after read :P

[shunluv]

love this chapter very much<3
finally Junsu admitting his real feeling and stop making thing confusing anymore especially for Min because his action previous making things seem like he in love with Min instead lol xD
seriously they both love each other but end up messing things up with all the misunderstanding...
so Junsu know all along about Min feeling for Jae..
glad to see Yoosu finally made up and solve their misunderstanding though poor Min watching those 2 together while his own love life is still in big mess^^;

and super happy finally Jae and Min talk again with Jae making the first move and one touch is back<3

[shunluv]

hmm not sure if Jae think that Min like Chun or Yunho :P

[rennie_88]

phew~ im glad u liked this chap cuz i really was not suure :S

oh mygod. when u summarize it all out its sooo confusing and messy -0- *headache* what have i done~? lolol
but def. excited about having jaemin back ~~ :D i missed them oh so much... ;_;

hopefully it will all make sense somehow in the end o_o !!

[yakuso5u]

MIIIIIIIINE!!!!! *runs to read tripping all over hearts and angst*

[yakuso5u]

FINALLY THE YOOSU!!! Oh boys, you so slow and frustrating I swear *facepalms* That was truly a mess of feelings and misunderstandings, I'm still a bit angry at Junsu for leading Changmin on even if it wasn't intentional. But somehow I can't resent Yoochun for the kiss. I'm so YooMin biaised *hides

[rennie_88]

lolol angst booby-traps everywhere, watch ur step >:F !

huhu i agree with that. yoomin pretty much have permission to do whatever they want and junsu just has to deal with it. :D dang.. tho i relly need real yoomin now :(

confessions ~~~~~~~~~~ its always a struggle to make them good/right :( and i mean...i still cant get over ur perfectly melty jaemin confession *_* ~ sigh ~

um well, plz allow for the possibility that jae was just being stupid ..cuz lots of ppl do stupid things with littlle or no reason..and im just grasping blindly for threads here lol, cuz maybe it wont all make sense and add up LOL ahg.. next time def not doing single pov. its harder than i thot *pout*

LOL i wish i took a hint from you long ago and had specific update days ..i duno what 'regular' is for me T^T

[yakuso5u]

What if I don't wanna watch my step, and fall into each and every angst-trap? :p

We are awfully biaised people... I guess no matter pairing we write, YooMin will be allowed to do whatever they want. I love you for that XD *HUGS* ♥

Lol the love scenes are the most difficult things to write for me >.< I've no problem with the angst, but when it comes to kissing and fluff... you've no idea how much time I spent on that confession scene XD It just doesn't come naturally >.<

Lol it's okay! Stupid Jae means ANGST! And well, did I tell you already how much I loved that? XD
But single POV was the right choice I think... ofc it's confusing, but I like it here, since Min makes his way through hypothesis and trying to make sense of his hyung's decisions. I find it interesting, it's definitely different and that allows us to really 'feel' the story and evolution of feelings from inside, if you see what I mean ^^

[osito_89]

hoinhas to just be happy to have jae as a friend and nothing more -_- as for yoosu im happy for them

[rennie_88]

well, he's very NOT happy abt just a friend so... kekeke its not over yet!!!!!!!!111

[shriya_4]

What have you done to my heart?! ;A;

This fic is amazing. I can practically feel every emotion that Min feels because its so well written.

♥ ♥

[rennie_88]

aiya~ dont worrie i promise it will be happy ending~~~~

thanks so much for reading :) im happy u appreciate my angst lol XD

[dongbangasm]

THE ANGSTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT~ AND THE FLUFFINESS THAT IS JAEMIN..
/squeal

and YAY FOR YOOSU! OMG Changmin is totally in love with Jae and jae you babo, tell him you love him too!

let's stop making jaemin suffer and get them together okay??

Poor yunho bb, he's going to be all alone~

sobs~

GUHHHHH! ANGST

[rennie_88]

puahahaha its not even that much fluff..but i guess it was a long time coming ~ :P

u want them together NOW? mmm not yet but maybe they can havesome more fluff :D heh heh heh

yunho's a man. he can take it ~XD