[Fic] The Three Kisses - chapter 8

Jun 15, 2012 01:16

Title: The three kisses
Pairing(s): Everyone/Changmin
Length: Chaptered (8/?)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: drama, romance, angst

Summary: Someone’s writing Changmin love letters. How’s he supposed to identify his admirer when all four of his band mates seem like the one?

A/N: this chapter didn't originally exist, but got some lovely comments that changed my mind ( Read more... )

genre: romance, pairing: jaemin, title: the three kisses, pairing: yoosu, genre: drama, rating: pg-13, author: r, genre: angst, length: chapter

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yakuso5u June 14 2012, 16:54:54 UTC
MIIIIIIIINE!!!!! *runs to read tripping all over hearts and angst*

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yakuso5u June 14 2012, 17:31:04 UTC
FINALLY THE YOOSU!!! Oh boys, you so slow and frustrating I swear *facepalms* That was truly a mess of feelings and misunderstandings, I'm still a bit angry at Junsu for leading Changmin on even if it wasn't intentional. But somehow I can't resent Yoochun for the kiss. I'm so YooMin biaised *hides ( ... )

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rennie_88 June 17 2012, 05:56:45 UTC
lolol angst booby-traps everywhere, watch ur step >:F !

huhu i agree with that. yoomin pretty much have permission to do whatever they want and junsu just has to deal with it. :D dang.. tho i relly need real yoomin now :(

confessions ~~~~~~~~~~ its always a struggle to make them good/right :( and i mean...i still cant get over ur perfectly melty jaemin confession *_* ~ sigh ~

um well, plz allow for the possibility that jae was just being stupid ..cuz lots of ppl do stupid things with littlle or no reason..and im just grasping blindly for threads here lol, cuz maybe it wont all make sense and add up LOL ahg.. next time def not doing single pov. its harder than i thot *pout*

LOL i wish i took a hint from you long ago and had specific update days ..i duno what 'regular' is for me T^T

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yakuso5u June 18 2012, 13:30:00 UTC
What if I don't wanna watch my step, and fall into each and every angst-trap? :p

We are awfully biaised people... I guess no matter pairing we write, YooMin will be allowed to do whatever they want. I love you for that XD *HUGS* ♥

Lol the love scenes are the most difficult things to write for me >.< I've no problem with the angst, but when it comes to kissing and fluff... you've no idea how much time I spent on that confession scene XD It just doesn't come naturally >.<

Lol it's okay! Stupid Jae means ANGST! And well, did I tell you already how much I loved that? XD
But single POV was the right choice I think... ofc it's confusing, but I like it here, since Min makes his way through hypothesis and trying to make sense of his hyung's decisions. I find it interesting, it's definitely different and that allows us to really 'feel' the story and evolution of feelings from inside, if you see what I mean ^^

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rennie_88 June 18 2012, 15:06:12 UTC
then i'll just have to set MORE traps. D:

at least if we're gona be biased, we have the singularly BESTest most perfectest bias of all biases :) i love you for that toooo <3 *twirling hug* ~

lool~ dont forget, we're the same person u_u *coughcough* i feel ur pain TT and you must have noticed i dont do much fluff or anything really past kissing either -0- its why they always get interrupted or... the scene ends LOLOL and i scream and kick thru writing the whole thing and can barely reread it sigh. maybe we have to help each other out cuz reading it is totally diff story... it doenst make sense lol

well i've got ur support so i feel confidentish again!!!!! lol ~ i dont think i intended to do it this way, it just happened and u kno wat thats like . so hopefully it will sorta make sense in the end :P

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yakuso5u June 19 2012, 15:27:54 UTC
Look at us, writing JaeMin stories and fantasizing about YooMin on the side. Just what is wrong with us? XD

Lol I don't re-read those scenes either >__< I write them the best I can and then I try to forget they exist XD
It's just soooo frustrating... it's all perfect in your head but there's just no way to put it into words... either it turns into something with poetry and butterflies and disgustingly cheesy, either you're getting clinical about it speaking of tongues and lips and it just sounds awful. Ugh -_-"

Sometimes the best ideas are the ones you get on the spur of the moment~ Sudden inspiration! X'D And then you read what you just wrote and you wonder what happened to your original idea... :p

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