Or rather: it wasn't going anywhere without Billy, and Billy was, apparently, going.
Man, thank you so much for this, it's awesome! I really like how you've distilled the original, and that added new ending. And hey, bonus points for teaching an ESL a new acronym ;)
I'm glad you enjoyed it; I did feel as though I was cheating and more condensing than remixing. And, hmm, acronym - the Q. E. Fucking D.? I agonized over that, because, you know, FOUR WHOLE WORDS out of my 100! :-)
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This was great--painful and ow in all the best ways.
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Man, thank you so much for this, it's awesome! I really like how you've distilled the original, and that added new ending. And hey, bonus points for teaching an ESL a new acronym ;)
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I love that! Also, way to pack a punch at the end.
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His voice in this was lovely... so sad and angsty and painful and honest. If you'll pardon me saying so. :D
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