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taiga13 July 19 2009, 20:40:39 UTC
Wow, this was great.

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shara_i July 27 2009, 03:08:23 UTC
Thank you!

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topaz_eyes July 19 2009, 21:16:18 UTC
Oh, this is gorgeous--how Peter and James switch places, while James drowns in grief, a beautiful mirror to the original.

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shara_i July 27 2009, 03:12:23 UTC
Thank you! I loved the way Mer showed the change in Peter and James' relationship as they got older in the original fic, so I really wanted to focus on that here.

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mer_duff July 19 2009, 21:57:02 UTC
Thank you! I was so thrilled when I saw that you'd chosen this story to remix and you've taken it in such a wonderful direction. It is a mirror - I love how you flipped the focus from past to present and the journey Peter takes to helping James. I especially love the details of his dislocation - he's been thrown out of his expected role as a younger brother and he grows into what James needs beautifully! Thank you again - I couldn't have hoped for anything better!

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shara_i July 27 2009, 03:26:28 UTC
Oh wow, I'm so glad you like it! You won't believe how intimidated I was when I found out you were my remixee. I love how you created and developed the universe of Wilson and his brothers in your stories and this story especially showed the bond between James and Peter so beautifully I had to try my hand at remixing it. I was a bit nervous writing from Peter's POV, because he is technically an OC and I didn't have a reference for his voice from the show, but it's a tribute to how deeply and thoroughly you've developed him that I could perceive his personality clearly enough to write him here. :)

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mer_duff July 27 2009, 06:14:41 UTC
Peter was wonderful - I'm so happy that you chose to enrich his character like this. He feels absolutely true to the way I imagine him, but at the same time you've made him your own.

I was intimidated by the entire remix process, so I can totally empathize!

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nightdog_barks July 20 2009, 01:17:41 UTC
This is beautiful. I love Peter's viewpoint so much -- it's always such a pleasure to see these familiar characters through other eyes.

Just wonderful.

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shara_i July 27 2009, 03:34:11 UTC
Thank you! I was a bit worried about writing from Peter's POV because I didn't want to mess up his voice or personality, so I'm glad you liked his viewpoint here. :)

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nightdog_barks July 28 2009, 02:42:36 UTC
*smiles*

I loved his viewpoint. You are a terrific writer, and this was such a wonderful remix. Mem'ing this now.

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kassrachel July 21 2009, 23:05:52 UTC
This is gorgeous and sharp and painful, very like the story you're remixing. Wow. Ouch. Nice work.

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shara_i July 27 2009, 03:35:59 UTC
Thank you! The deep, heartbreaking sense of loss in the original was what drew me to it, and I can only hope that I did justice to that.

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