Whispered Screams - Chapter 33

[redrosesblack]

At long long last, another chapter... and with an Extra, too, no less! Yes, okay, it's kinda short, but I hope you get a kick out of it, anyway. I'm still very inexperienced with writing lemon parts, but I will get some more practice with the rest of the story. Consider that a spoiler, if you want. I suppose it was always kind of obvious

Comments

[anonymous]

woah!! very hot lemon indeed.. this entry is beautifully done.. already read it twice.. seifer's persona is more defined in this one and squall's naivety is captured so realisticly, i wouldn't want them written in any other way..

if you really done this in 6 hours.. you really are a writing goddess ^^

thanks for uploading another so soon.. appreciate it very much.. hope everything is well in your life and can't wait to know what's in store next!

Z

[redrosesblack]

Haha, thank you, but no I did not write it in 6 hours... There is no way, no how. I took about 6 hours just to write the last few sentences and edit it :) I am very glad you liked it.

[anonymous]

I am sorry for bothering you,but the link doesn't seem to be working for me =(
A friend tried it out,but all it appears is something to open up a site...
Does that site block ip's from outside US or something?

[redrosesblack]

I wouldn't think that it does. It works fine for me, and I know others have looked at it as well. I am not sure why it wouldn't be working :(

[erasera]

It's me, Virulent Enmity. My name changed a while ago. Just wanted to make sure you know it's me! xP

Anywho, this chapter was fantabulous and I'm so glad you want to see this baby through to the end. I can't believe it's been over 6 years - I was a freshman in high school when you started this, holy hell, lol!

Seifer and Squall's first lemon. I was so sure their very first time would be dry humping to completion or something like that, but Seifer needed the peen in his mouth, kekeke. Mmm, that was hot shit because Seifer is so macho~ and he has no issue giving Squall a blowjob...! And the imagery of them playing and leading up to that turned-on point... I could completely see it in my mind and wished I was there! Ugh, life's so unfair! TT_TT Don't worry about your lemons -- they're just as good as your regular writing! ^.^

[redrosesblack]

OMG girl, it's been forever! How are you?!

BTW... I love that you use the word peen. Half of my friends have no idea what that even is. Sad, eh?

[erasera]

I've been alright. Sifting my way through adult life - how fun it is... -.- How're things with you? Seeing someone now?

[distorted_r]

Thank you so much for updating! I throughly enjoyed this chapter as well as the one that came so quickly before it

[redrosesblack]

"Squall still has some deep emotional problems that are not just going to be simply fixed by Seifer's penis" I loved that line, it actually made me laugh out loud :) I'm really happy to hear that you like the way things have been progressing at a slower pacer rather than a rushed one. I know I can't please everyone, but it's always so nice to hear when someone agrees that problems of Squall's magnitude cannot be fixed in a matter of a few weeks.

Thank you kindly for that massive and sweet comment, I appreciate it lots and lots :)

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