Whispered Screams - Chapter 33

Dec 03, 2010 06:02

At long long last, another chapter... and with an Extra, too, no less! Yes, okay, it's kinda short, but I hope you get a kick out of it, anyway. I'm still very inexperienced with writing lemon parts, but I will get some more practice with the rest of the story. Consider that a spoiler, if you want. I suppose it was always kind of obvious.

Anyway, give me your thoughts. I know this was a big step for our two protagonists, but I feel it followed a natural evolution in their relationship. But feel free to tell me I'm wrong :) Either way, there will be more lemon, just because I want there to be.

And now it is bedtime for me. I've spent the past 6 hours finishing this. Enjoy!

Chapter 33

Edit: Updated link since old link is no longer working.

chapter 33, whispered screams, northern lights

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