Feedback on my last novel excerpt...please?

[raven_estrella]

Hi everyone. So far nobody has commented on my last blog post. People must be busy, maybe with the start of the new school year and all

Comments

[music_lover3]

Didn't I comment on that post? I could've sworn I did...Anyway, I'll read it tomorrow.

[raven_estrella]

No worries! I think I'm being kind of obnoxious. I was like, "So. Nobody has commented on my last post. Here it is--and read it NOW." Sorry! : )