Feedback on my last novel excerpt...please?
Hi everyone. So far nobody has commented on my last blog post. People must be busy, maybe with the start of the new school year and all!
Well, I've decided to ask for feedback on the novel excerpt that I included as part of my last post. Just let me know what you think of it. If you have time, also let me know what you think of the photos that got messed up by my faulty memory card. I'm inclined to look on the bright side and consider them artwork... : )
Oh, I forgot: Here is a link to the entry with the novel excerpt and photos.
http://raven-estrella.livejournal.com/13939.html
Well, I've decided to ask for feedback on the novel excerpt that I included as part of my last post. Just let me know what you think of it. If you have time, also let me know what you think of the photos that got messed up by my faulty memory card. I'm inclined to look on the bright side and consider them artwork... : )
Oh, I forgot: Here is a link to the entry with the novel excerpt and photos.
http://raven-estrella.livejournal.com/13939.html