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oldbatj June 29 2012, 19:03:57 UTC
This was fantastic! Truly enjoyed Jared's badass character! ....and Jensen's, as a morally-challenged man pushed past his limits.

I pitied 'Joker'Jared and his desert meltdown as I realized what Jensen had told him about the children must have triggered a horrid memory regarding his own past. Loved that he used Jen's revelations of JD's physical weaknesses against the monster. I hope you can give us a few timestamps as time goes on!

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raths_kitten July 1 2012, 20:41:37 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. And yeah, I might write a time stamp. I realize I kind of left Jared vastly unexplored. I had a bit more on him that I didn't tell.

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oddlyspoken June 29 2012, 20:37:28 UTC
I really enjoyed this mixture of twisted darkness and sweet hope. Thank you for sharing.

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raths_kitten July 1 2012, 20:43:25 UTC
Thank you. :)

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joyofreading June 29 2012, 22:13:51 UTC
raths_kitten July 1 2012, 20:44:28 UTC
Thank you. I hope so as well. ;)

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harrigan June 30 2012, 12:20:15 UTC
I didn't expect this! It was totally satisfying- thanks for sharing!

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raths_kitten July 1 2012, 20:45:42 UTC
Thank you. :)

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bellagattino June 30 2012, 20:27:04 UTC
Holy crap! I loved this.

Can I ask for more??? Please? Pretty pretty please with J2 on top?

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raths_kitten July 1 2012, 20:46:27 UTC
I might write a timestamp. I'll see. Be aware that I have a horrid track record with sequels. ;)

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