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dolnmoon June 29 2012, 00:57:05 UTC
I really liked this. Jared as a bad guy then turning good guy was awesome and Jensen was smart and manipulative..

JDM always makes the perfect bad guy or asshole well cast darling well cast.

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raths_kitten June 29 2012, 06:52:02 UTC
Thank you. At first I wanted to use Misha as baddie instead, because we always use JDM, but when I'd actually worked out why Jensen left, it couldn't be Misha anymore.

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zara_zee June 29 2012, 08:17:56 UTC
Awesome. Enjoyed this very much! :)

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raths_kitten July 1 2012, 20:24:49 UTC
Thank you. :D

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roxymissrose June 29 2012, 13:27:41 UTC
I really wasn't sure what Jared was going to do, you made him sort of scary and unreadable at first. Of course, I loved the end!

Thanks for sharing this, I really enjoyed this!

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raths_kitten July 1 2012, 20:26:41 UTC
I'm glad I kept you guessing. ;) Thank you very much.

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katsheswims June 29 2012, 18:06:12 UTC
Awww, I really liked this. There were some dark themes, but the sweetness at the end was so perfect.

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raths_kitten July 1 2012, 20:26:59 UTC
Thank you!

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sandycub June 29 2012, 18:51:36 UTC
This was such a great read! First I just thought pool hustling would lead to some sexy times but then Jared drugged him and locked him in the trunk! I really loved your reveal of how they both got in to what they "do" and the showdown with Jeff!

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raths_kitten July 1 2012, 20:30:09 UTC
Thank you. :)

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