Ho'opakele (2/2)

[ratherastory]

Part I

Comments

[greeneyes_fan]

Aw, I love this! What a smart little girl.

[ratherastory]

Yay, thank you! I do love Gracie as a character. She is going to grow up into a fantastic woman.

[izzie7]

That was great - I really enjoyed having Gracie's POV.

[ratherastory]

Thank you very much! :D

[tli]

That was wonderful! Loved how you wrote Grace.

[ratherastory]

Thank you very much! I'm really pleased you liked it. :)

[klutzy_girl]

This was amazing. Loved Grace's POV. I think it's amazing that she even attempted to escape. Awww at Steve calling her "Baby". So cute! And I love that Grace latched onto him after that. So sweet and sad at the same time.

I loved this so much!

[ratherastory]

Thank you!

I thought the 'baby' thing worked well-by now Steve must think of Gracie as sort of a surrogate daughter, in my opinion. The kid he thinks he'll never be able to have (because Steve is a soft-hearted idiot who doesn't think he deserves to have a family).

I'm glad you liked it!

[enigmaticblues]

This was really sweet. I enjoyed it very much.

[ratherastory]

Thank you so much! I can't tell you how pleased I am to hear that. :D