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adafrog November 12 2023, 03:31:07 UTC
Wait, is the last paragraph related?

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raquinn November 12 2023, 03:39:46 UTC

The last paragraph is not directly related. It is jumping ahead two years and bent towards Kallon's perspective.

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adafrog November 12 2023, 03:42:54 UTC

Okay. It sounds really cool, but I was starting to wonder if the critter had an inner life we weren't aware of. :) (which is funny, because I listen to the White Vault podcast, and it would definitely be possible.)

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raquinn November 12 2023, 03:50:47 UTC

Kallon's story is so different from Sray's and it's both great and awful because of all the things he goes through (I swear, I don't purposefully torment my characters, it's just the way things went down....).

It probably does have its own inner life, but I think it's more along the lines of finding a wallaby or something to go eat than worrying about the passage of time.

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