Comments | ran_mouri82: Kiss #8: It's Good for You

ran_mouri82

Kiss #8: It's Good for You

Apr 09, 2007 22:50

Title: It’s Good for You
Author: ran_mouri82
Word Count: 423
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Detective Conan is pwned by Aoyama Gosho. I only admire his l33t skillz.
Pairing: Kudou Shin’ichi and Mouri Ran
Notes: 30 Kisses: #28 - Wada Calcium CD3

( Conan struggled to preserve his manly dignity in the face of a kiddy vitamin. )

detective conan, 30 kisses, fanfiction

Comments 9

Comment from candy__chan . . . on her behalf ran_mouri82 April 10 2007, 03:27:29 UTC

"...you are sooooooo totally my hero. your story = massive amounts of hearting <3"

Just so Candy can rest assured that she does comment. ^_~

Re: Comment from candy__chan . . . on her behalf candy__chan April 10 2007, 21:56:55 UTC

I KNOW I FAIL AT COMMENTING!! *flops down on the floor and goes emoooooo*

Re: Comment from candy__chan . . . on her behalf ran_mouri82 April 12 2007, 00:53:34 UTC

*hugs tight* ^________^

No emoing allowed heeeeeere! You fail at nothing, and if you beg to differ . . . *dusts off non-squeaky mallet of doom*

girlquinn April 10 2007, 05:35:26 UTC

*claps*

"You want to grow up big and strong, don’t you . . . just like Shin’ichi-niichan?"

My favorite line! I just had a random thought of hopeful Conan utilizing the vitamins in such a way... Although I doubt he actually would, again, random pointless thought.

Nevertheless, yay! Kiss! And a cute one at that!

ran_mouri82 April 12 2007, 00:51:29 UTC

*bows with a flourish*

I'm so glad you liked! Every now and then, I providentially come up with a zinger. It seemed the best way to work that theme . . . after all, it's not the easiest one in the Kisses! (Wada Calcium CD3?!) XD

insaneladybug April 10 2007, 12:57:25 UTC

LOL. Priceless! XD Poor Conan. Of all the indignities. I'm amused by him liking the vitamin at the end. And of course, by Ran's patience being near-end as she tricks him into accepting the pill.

I myself never liked any chewy vitamins except the Bugs Bunny brand. All others were pretty much Yuck to me. XD Though, gummy vitamins. Interesting concept.... X3

ran_mouri82 April 12 2007, 01:02:14 UTC

Thanks so much! The story was going to feature a regular chewable vitamin, but then I saw a commercial for the new gummy!Flintstones vitamins and knew it was meant to be. o.o

magic_truth April 12 2007, 01:07:35 UTC

Here it is!! *laugh* Sorry, it's just that I'm used to checking ff.net for challenge updates. But I remembered that Lent was over so I figured you'd be updating your LJ and I came over to check and lo and behold a NEW kiss. Yay!!

This was so cute and funny. Shinichi would be the only guy to hate children's vitamins. This reminds me of something similar I did to my little brother once. He hated eggs but loved sausage so I hid a bit of egg behind the sausage (since he had to have both), he ate it and then made a face much like what I imagine Conan's was like.

All in all just adorable and great as usual! Would be hilarious if he had a dream that the vitamin did make him grow up to be big and strong like Shinichi.

Take it as a compliment Shinichi and leave it at that.

ran_mouri82 April 14 2007, 04:07:37 UTC

Wow! You're such a dedicated reader . . . thank you! *gives big squeeze*

Er, yeah, ff.net's being a massive dork and won't let me post new documents. Dangit! *kicks ff.net* I'm two Kisses behind! But I'll try again soon.

I've never had a little brother, but I could only imagine that Conan's patience with baby treatment must have some limit. He does still have a reputation to protect, or something. And your "egg scheme" was classic. XD

Yeah, I think he's over it. Are you, Conan? Yep, he's still whistling offkey. ^^