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Kink me up, ladies!

Mar 27, 2010 11:14

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porn, ray person is awesome, brad colbert, slash, generation kill, meme, nate fick, walt hassar

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Brad/Ray (Nate) anonymous March 27 2010, 04:01:48 UTC

Manipulative, mean, possessive Ray. Nate is in love with Brad, but Brad is oblivious because he only has eyes for Mrs Brad Colbert, IE; Ray. Ray knows about Nate's feelings, however, and is none too pleased. So Ray somehow sets it up so Nate will be watching him and Brad have sex (without Brad's consent or knowledge). Bonus points for Ray riding Brad while looking straight at Nate with a triumphant 'he's mine, bitch' look on his face.

Sorry about the long, detailed prompt, I just really want some asshole!Ray-Ray.

Re: Brad/Ray (Nate) 1/2 anonymous March 30 2010, 00:48:19 UTC

Ray is fucking sick of USMC Command and officers like Captain America and Encino Man, who cannot tell their hands from their asshole, sick of the fucked-up commands from Godfather, intent on fellating General Mattis and scoring a date to prom as Mattis's arm candy ( ... )

Re: Brad/Ray (Nate) 2/3 anonymous March 30 2010, 00:49:56 UTC

Ray knows that the LT does not deserve this. He knows that the only reason Bravo Two is not more fucked up is because of the LT. God knows he would not want to be in Kocher's shoes, the whole platoon having to fucking babysit their retard of a CO ( ... )

Re: Brad/Ray (Nate) 3/3 anonymous March 30 2010, 00:50:48 UTC

"Fuck, Brad" Ray moaned, the head of his cock meeting the back of Brad's throat. He kept his eyes on the LT. In the dim light of the background arty drops, Ray could make out the outline of the bulge in the LT's MOPP suit, hands clenched into fists by his sides, probably digging little crescents into his palms. Fuck if the thought of the LT wanting this, what Ray has, does not make Ray harden even further in Brad's mouth ( ... )

Re: Brad/Ray (Nate) 3/3 queeniegalore March 30 2010, 00:56:31 UTC

Fuck. Yes.

I love this. I love that Brad and Ray are in love and Ray is so desperate to keep Brad, to not let anything take him away. I love how Brad is oblivious. I love the LT, how sexy he is, how innocent. And uuuggh, Ray. Ray is just one hot motherfucker, even when he's being an arsehole.

I want a threesome sequel where Brad and Ray dom the LT, especially if Ray's in charge. I mean, you, the writer, are god, but I can pray, right? :D

Thank you, lovely anon!

Re: Brad/Ray (Nate) 3/3 anonymous March 30 2010, 01:49:38 UTC

*blushes*

Thank you for hosting this wonderful meme. I'm settling here with cookies and milk till GK2 comes out! It's so hard to muster up the balls to write in this fandom, seeing as all the writers here are so fucking talented.

I was worried that Ray might be OOC since our dearest pal Ray Ray is not by nature a manipulative motherfucker. Hopefully it was ok and your lovely meme will not kick the ficlet out for not having enough filthy, dirty, sweaty, violent pron, which is the point of the meme!

Thank you so very much for reading and commenting! =D

Re: Brad/Ray (Nate) 3/3 anonymous March 30 2010, 21:52:56 UTC

UNF. Looooooved it. <3

Re: Brad/Ray (Nate) 3/3 anonymous April 2 2010, 01:56:15 UTC

Wow. This was awesome. So perfectly Ray, to want to exact a little vengeance on command, and not holding the LT sacrosanct like Brad does. And the interplay between the two of them, with Brad on his knees between them was just amazing. I could feel what they were both going through, not just Ray, and it was at once heartbreaking and exhaulting.

Re: Brad/Ray (Nate) 3/3 jones6 May 20 2010, 11:05:55 UTC

FUCK I LOVE YOU.

Re: Brad/Ray (Nate) 1/2 anonymous April 1 2010, 03:19:28 UTC

Ohhhh, SHIIIT. Like...legit 'oh shit, it's goin' down.' Just lookit -- you've turned me all ghetto. LOL I have to run, but I read this first part and couldn't NOT say anything. That is an AWESOME set up. Props. Can't wait to read the rest!

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