Re: Brad/Ray (Nate) 3/3
anonymous
March 30 2010, 00:50:48 UTC
"Fuck, Brad" Ray moaned, the head of his cock meeting the back of Brad's throat. He kept his eyes on the LT. In the dim light of the background arty drops, Ray could make out the outline of the bulge in the LT's MOPP suit, hands clenched into fists by his sides, probably digging little crescents into his palms. Fuck if the thought of the LT wanting this, what Ray has, does not make Ray harden even further in Brad's mouth.
An arty drop closer to their position allowed Ray the pleasure of witnessing the LT's teeth sunk into his bottom lip, hard enough to draw blood. It occured to Ray that their LT was gorgeous, looking like a fucking altar-boy jailbait. Those lips probably inspired a few combat jacks among the men in the battalion; probably Godfather himself jacked off to the thought of those lips, red and wet, wrapped around his cock. When he was not jacking off to the thought of fucking himself open on General Mattis's giant cock, of course.
Ray could make out the way the LT's body was trembling against the redness of the arty light, whether from lust or heartbreak, Ray could only guess. He could almost feel sorry for him. Brad was a lot to lose; not that the LT had him to begin with.
Ray's eyes slid shut when he felt Brad's finger, wet with his spit begin to circle his entrance. He spread his legs wider, letting out a soft moan, the LT forgotten for the time being. Brad's slid one finger inside, probing for the bundle of nerves deep within Ray's body. He crooked it just so, hitting exactly the spot, making Ray's head spin and his knees buckle. Brad held his hand up to Ray's chest, steadying him.
"Brad..." Ray's moan sounded loud in the Iraqi night. When he was stable enough, Ray opened his eyes and in the light of the arty hit, met the LT's. He saw the LT's eyes widen, a swirl of emotion visible in those bright green eyes, before he managed to police it, a shutter drawn quickly, clamping down on the flicker Ray was assured he saw through the dim light. He held the LT's gaze through his climax, unsure of what was displayed on his own face, but hoping to hell it was not as easy to read as the LT's.
Re: Brad/Ray (Nate) 3/3queeniegaloreMarch 30 2010, 00:56:31 UTC
Fuck. Yes.
I love this. I love that Brad and Ray are in love and Ray is so desperate to keep Brad, to not let anything take him away. I love how Brad is oblivious. I love the LT, how sexy he is, how innocent. And uuuggh, Ray. Ray is just one hot motherfucker, even when he's being an arsehole.
I want a threesome sequel where Brad and Ray dom the LT, especially if Ray's in charge. I mean, you, the writer, are god, but I can pray, right? :D
Re: Brad/Ray (Nate) 3/3
anonymous
March 30 2010, 01:49:38 UTC
*blushes*
Thank you for hosting this wonderful meme. I'm settling here with cookies and milk till GK2 comes out! It's so hard to muster up the balls to write in this fandom, seeing as all the writers here are so fucking talented.
I was worried that Ray might be OOC since our dearest pal Ray Ray is not by nature a manipulative motherfucker. Hopefully it was ok and your lovely meme will not kick the ficlet out for not having enough filthy, dirty, sweaty, violent pron, which is the point of the meme!
Thank you so very much for reading and commenting! =D
Re: Brad/Ray (Nate) 3/3
anonymous
April 2 2010, 01:56:15 UTC
Wow. This was awesome. So perfectly Ray, to want to exact a little vengeance on command, and not holding the LT sacrosanct like Brad does. And the interplay between the two of them, with Brad on his knees between them was just amazing. I could feel what they were both going through, not just Ray, and it was at once heartbreaking and exhaulting.
An arty drop closer to their position allowed Ray the pleasure of witnessing the LT's teeth sunk into his bottom lip, hard enough to draw blood. It occured to Ray that their LT was gorgeous, looking like a fucking altar-boy jailbait. Those lips probably inspired a few combat jacks among the men in the battalion; probably Godfather himself jacked off to the thought of those lips, red and wet, wrapped around his cock. When he was not jacking off to the thought of fucking himself open on General Mattis's giant cock, of course.
Ray could make out the way the LT's body was trembling against the redness of the arty light, whether from lust or heartbreak, Ray could only guess. He could almost feel sorry for him. Brad was a lot to lose; not that the LT had him to begin with.
Ray's eyes slid shut when he felt Brad's finger, wet with his spit begin to circle his entrance. He spread his legs wider, letting out a soft moan, the LT forgotten for the time being. Brad's slid one finger inside, probing for the bundle of nerves deep within Ray's body. He crooked it just so, hitting exactly the spot, making Ray's head spin and his knees buckle. Brad held his hand up to Ray's chest, steadying him.
"Brad..." Ray's moan sounded loud in the Iraqi night. When he was stable enough, Ray opened his eyes and in the light of the arty hit, met the LT's. He saw the LT's eyes widen, a swirl of emotion visible in those bright green eyes, before he managed to police it, a shutter drawn quickly, clamping down on the flicker Ray was assured he saw through the dim light. He held the LT's gaze through his climax, unsure of what was displayed on his own face, but hoping to hell it was not as easy to read as the LT's.
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I love this. I love that Brad and Ray are in love and Ray is so desperate to keep Brad, to not let anything take him away. I love how Brad is oblivious. I love the LT, how sexy he is, how innocent. And uuuggh, Ray. Ray is just one hot motherfucker, even when he's being an arsehole.
I want a threesome sequel where Brad and Ray dom the LT, especially if Ray's in charge. I mean, you, the writer, are god, but I can pray, right? :D
Thank you, lovely anon!
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Thank you for hosting this wonderful meme. I'm settling here with cookies and milk till GK2 comes out! It's so hard to muster up the balls to write in this fandom, seeing as all the writers here are so fucking talented.
I was worried that Ray might be OOC since our dearest pal Ray Ray is not by nature a manipulative motherfucker. Hopefully it was ok and your lovely meme will not kick the ficlet out for not having enough filthy, dirty, sweaty, violent pron, which is the point of the meme!
Thank you so very much for reading and commenting! =D
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