Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Title: Vujà Dé
Author: Quasar (
quasar273)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: John/Rodney
Date written: February 2008
Length: ~11,000 words
Spoilers: many eps up to 4x15 Outcast
Warnings: borderline underage (15 year old with 16 year old)
Summary: It's bad enough being a teenager and probably gay, but going crazy makes it all worse.
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Vuja De )
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But of course Rodney is all about the fast talking so it had a very different rhythm once he showed up and forced John to talk about what was happening. To the extent I was aware of that, I worried a little that the pacing was unbalanced, and I tried to use the flash-forwards to offset some of it. But you make the unbalanced pace sound deliberate and meaningful and clever -- I love it!I think that is how some of the best pieces work though -- you are trying to do one thing, and an entirely different objective (that's not the word I want, but all I can come up with) blossoms out of that. I just took a class with a poetry professor that said ( ... )
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An excellent premise wonderfully executed. All of the characters spot on, and the way you wove the past/present and the future/present was brilliant!
In conclusion - fic good.
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