[Halloween Fics] - TWENTY-NINE

[quakewithfear]

            Riku closed the door to the laboratory behind it quietly.  It wasn’t supposed to be in here.  Master would be angry if he found out… or perhaps not.  But Even would be.  In fact, Even would be furious.  The clone’s fear of its creator was far outstripped by its respect for its master, but Even could still hurt it (and justifiably) if he

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[illianor]

Yay! First comment! Anyways - woa. Once again, I wasn't sure whether to be freaked or to cry. You seem to have that effect on me alot. *ponders* Anyways...You did a really good job with the kink, strangely enough. I'm still not sure how, but there you go.
And once again, I've ended up almost crying over your Replica fics!!!
Well done! :D

[quakewithfear]

*laugh* If I've written someone that at least gets someone to think, I feel like I've done a good job. Freaking out is just a perk.

I'm not out to make anyone cry, I promise! But it is kind of cool to know that someone's that deeply affected. It's good because I have no plans to stop abusing the replicas anytime soon. ^_^ Thank you for reading!

[lottery]

...wow. Just.

Oh my God.

WOW.

The whole concept of multiple clones and numbers and amputation just made my dark craving for Halloween horror complete.

Thank you so much for this. ♥

[quakewithfear]

Thank you for reading! I'm just pleased that my dark month fics are serving their purpose!

[keyblade277]

I-Is it bad that I'm feeling more sorry for Even than for the Replicas? ;~; My poor mad scientist... I have a feeling something terrible is going to happen to you... *hugs protectively*

Still in anticipation for the next Bad Affection chapter, though. I couldn't say why, though...

[quakewithfear]

*laugh* One of these days, I'm going to write an Even-centric fic just to prove that I like him too! I'm just... mean to him... all the time. ^^;;;;

Bad Affection is at the top of the priority list as soon as I catch up on dark fics! So be looking out for a new chapter sometime fairly soon.

[marchwarden23]

I love this AU so damn much and this story just adds another dimension to it. A really fucked up dimension, but then again, that's what I love about it. =D

[quakewithfear]

*GRIN* Thank you very much! It's my favorite little universe to mess around in. And of course, the prompt leant itself so well to it that I had to do a BAd Affection thing.

Amputation fetish > experimentation > Riku Replica > Bad Affection. Yay for thought processes!

[kacfrog711]

That... was sexy. And creepy. And sexy. Very nice job. <3 Admittedly, it was kind of hard to get into at first. the writing was choppy and you had some awkward phrasing and cliche descriptions. But by the time you got to the description of Riku's brothers, everything was smooth and captivating and just GUH. Poor Way (great name <3), and lovely Riku, and tonguing his stitches is gross and awesome and gross. <3 Really nice sense of touch and sight in this. The only thing I really wanted was smell. You know, stitches and laboratories... they have that antiseptic, or formaldehyde smell. It's really distinctive and makes me sick to my stomach, so I would've liked to have some mention of it. But I really loved all the other descriptions and sad little dialogue and thoughts you wrote in there. This is definitely one of my favorites of the month. But then, I am a LITTLE biased towards the BA universe <3ps

[quakewithfear]

Thanks so much for the crits! I'll definitely keep this in mind so that next time is better. I can't believe I forgot to mention smells. WTF was I on?

YAY STITCHES! Stitches are always sexy!