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Savin/Mari Fic -- You Don't Wanna Know (Sequel to Firsts)

Feb 03, 2013 23:57

I don’t know long I stay in the bathroom, trying to collect myself. How -- I can’t believe I fucking cheated on Mari. Worse, I can’t believe how good it felt -- Christ, can I really blame Egan’s seduction powers for that? As much as I want to, I don’t think I can.

( I’m still shaking as I push my glasses up the bridge of my nose and exit the bathroom. )

member: alien_writings, rating: r, character: mari, pairing: savin/mari, trigger: dubcon, pre-au canon, character: savin

Comments 3

theun4givables February 4 2013, 14:20:27 UTC

We need to stop this because I'm sure there's a way that we can take this one level deeper and I'm not sure I can handle the Inception references lolololol.

Actually I know how exactly to take it one level deeper and I won't. I fucking won't, okay? lol I need to get back to canon stuff...eventually.

n3m3sis43 February 8 2013, 00:04:34 UTC

It took me a few days to figure out what I wanted to say about this story. I know we had some conversations about this story arc and how to treat it sensitively and how that affects the "canon" of the AU. So I'm not gonna rehash all that but the main thing that stuck out to me was Savin's mom's response to finding out what happened. Savin's emotions are likely to be a lot more muddled but I feel like his mom might have a much stronger response than she does here. Granted, some parents would sort of shrug it off if they found out their child was sexually abused (guess how I know this). But it doesn't feel in character for me based on the canon for Savin's mom ( ... )

alien_writings February 8 2013, 17:40:05 UTC

You're right about Savin's mom's reaction, which, now that we've discussed this story arc, doesn't feel right.

I think you do as well as I do with Savin's voice (if you're not doing it better) -- you just don't see me being all "is this right? Is this right? Would he say that?" to Alicia when I'm writing him.