[ HOW'S MY DRIVING? ]

Any feedback and constructive criticism of the way I play Hisako? (Other than the bit where I consistently spell Armour the British way :P) Please offer them here; I'd like to know how I can improve.

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[ LOGS ]
001; arrival at XI, meeting Laura and discovering her armour does have a vulnerability.
002; meeting Rictor at the mall.
003; meeting Cass.

[ CHARACTER INFORMATION ]
NAME: Hisako Ichiki
CODENAME: Armour
SERIES/SOURCE: X-Men
AGE: Young- about 15?
GENDER: Female
ROLE: Student

AU BACKGROUND:Hisako is a pretty average youngster with a fairly normal background. She grew up in Japan, living in the Ichiki household with her extended family including her grandparents. Her powers manifested ( Read more... )