My apologies for the lengthy delay in posting another chapter. I have written several beginnings to this chapter, but could not find something I liked. I finally decided on this one.
Hot chocolate with sprinkles and extra chunky cookies to the person that can name all the guest stars in this chapter.
Title: Once upon a Time...
Chapter: 5
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I love how you write Ratchet--he's just so quirky. XD
You, my dear, have me on the edge of my SEAT for the next part!
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I don't write Ratchet, Ratchet writes Ratchet, I just get hijacked, and he steals scenes. He's such the Primadonna you know XD
More is coming XD
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Ooh, and you're right about spark explosion, not a nice way to go.
Thanks for reading XD
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Now, why do I get the feeling that Jazz's brother also had been "in the wrong place at the wrong time", but without twins to aid? *sniffs*
Well, it's good to see the twins, even in the grim circumstances. And
Ratchet too.
>>>“Your shoulder is playing up, Prowl.”
>>>He didn’t dare defy that tone.
Heh, of course he didn't! You don't cross your medic if you know what's good for you! :)
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Prowl is starting to go through the wringer on this chapter, and that infamous glitch is starting to make its presence known XD
Yeah had to sneak the twins in there somehow XD
And Ratchet, he had the 'tude long before the war XD
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