Once Upon a Time Ch5

Jul 02, 2008 17:09


 My apologies for the lengthy delay in posting another chapter. I have written several beginnings to this chapter, but could not find something I liked. I finally decided on this one.

Hot chocolate with sprinkles and extra chunky cookies to the person that can name all the guest stars in this chapter.

Title: Once upon a Time...

Chapter: 5
Links: Ch1, Read more... )

character: jazz only, multi chapter, prowlxjazz, rated r, poster: snugsbunny, fan fiction, character: prowl only

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tvcatbarn July 3 2008, 05:24:50 UTC
MORE OF THIS IS WONDERFUL! :D

I love how you write Ratchet--he's just so quirky. XD

You, my dear, have me on the edge of my SEAT for the next part!

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snugsbunny July 3 2008, 19:05:47 UTC
Thanks honey XD

I don't write Ratchet, Ratchet writes Ratchet, I just get hijacked, and he steals scenes. He's such the Primadonna you know XD

More is coming XD

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spectregeneral July 3 2008, 17:39:40 UTC
*shiver* Spark explosion?! Damn, what a cruel way to kill someone!! And poor Prowl just had the ground ripped out from under him. Moar!!!! I plead for moar of this wonderful fic!!!

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snugsbunny July 3 2008, 19:06:46 UTC
More will come, with more thrills, spills and special guest stars.

Ooh, and you're right about spark explosion, not a nice way to go.

Thanks for reading XD

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syntia_13 August 14 2008, 11:55:57 UTC
Ouch, ouch, ouch ouch! Poor Prowl, saddled with a desk job, harassed by superiors, AND discovering what a disgusting dump he's a part of. *hugs the not-yet-Datsun*
Now, why do I get the feeling that Jazz's brother also had been "in the wrong place at the wrong time", but without twins to aid? *sniffs*

Well, it's good to see the twins, even in the grim circumstances. And
Ratchet too.
>>>“Your shoulder is playing up, Prowl.”
>>>He didn’t dare defy that tone.
Heh, of course he didn't! You don't cross your medic if you know what's good for you! :)

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snugsbunny August 18 2008, 06:01:08 UTC
Glad you enjoyed this chapter.

Prowl is starting to go through the wringer on this chapter, and that infamous glitch is starting to make its presence known XD

Yeah had to sneak the twins in there somehow XD

And Ratchet, he had the 'tude long before the war XD

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