Once Upon a Time Ch5

Jul 02, 2008 17:09


 My apologies for the lengthy delay in posting another chapter. I have written several beginnings to this chapter, but could not find something I liked. I finally decided on this one.

Hot chocolate with sprinkles and extra chunky cookies to the person that can name all the guest stars in this chapter.

Title: Once upon a Time...

Chapter: 5
Links: Ch1, Read more... )

character: jazz only, multi chapter, prowlxjazz, rated r, poster: snugsbunny, fan fiction, character: prowl only

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dark_daebereth July 2 2008, 16:53:06 UTC
Oooh oooh, me, pick me! I can has the hot chocolate with cookies? XD

I don't think I can tell you enough times how much I like the start of this. And I say again, you are an evil, evil tease, and I love you.

Always got time for ya sweetheart.

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snugsbunny July 3 2008, 18:59:17 UTC
Okay, you get the hot chocolate anhd cookies XD

Reveal all XD

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dark_daebereth July 4 2008, 00:32:19 UTC
Dude, no-one else got any of them? -hordes cookies-

Meet Sunstreaker, Sideswipe and Mirage, people! Knew about the immenent arrival of the Twins, I guessed the last one my own self and was floored when snugsbunny confirmed it.

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vericus July 2 2008, 17:05:28 UTC
Note to self: actually read the previous chapters before you start on chapter 5 of a story, and don't just think you did...*wonders how in heck that happened as she goes to read the other chapters*

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dark_daebereth July 2 2008, 17:21:06 UTC
Oh man. This couldn't have made much sense to you?

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vericus July 2 2008, 17:58:21 UTC
Naaw, read the first paragraph or two and was like 'wtf? I thought I read this story!'

Turns out I did read the first chapter. Just didn't read the rest, lol.

But I likies it, yes indeed. *sagenod*

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dark_daebereth July 2 2008, 18:03:48 UTC
Heh. It's funny because I did that with another fic. I still don't know how I missed a chapter.

She keeps throwing in those OMG! moments, doesn't she?

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cmdrtekk July 2 2008, 21:48:47 UTC
Good chapter. And more intrigue!

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snugsbunny July 3 2008, 19:01:32 UTC
Glad you're still enjoying. More intrigue to come, before all questions are answered XD

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prowlsgirl July 3 2008, 03:21:40 UTC
Primus. I hope Prowl didn't blow logic processor from this information.

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snugsbunny July 3 2008, 19:02:12 UTC
Don't worry he'll recover. He has to for Ch6 ;D

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mmouse15 July 3 2008, 03:40:02 UTC
Ah, the plot thickens. I would imagine that information is quite a blow to Prowl. This will change how he looks at things, won't it?
Awesome chapter. I like Ratchet in here - he cares, and he's doing what he can.
And I have no idea who the two are that found the youngling. I'm full of phail tonight...

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snugsbunny July 3 2008, 19:04:12 UTC
Ah this plot is thicker than creamy chicken soup XD
Hmm, as for Prowl, well, you'll need to read Ch6 to see how it has affected him.
Don't worry about not guessing the mechs. They slipped in there so quietly, unusal for them XD

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