I wrote a fluff fic. About Sasuke in Sound. Shoot me now, please...

[proanon]

Disclaimer: This is just a silly crack!fic, although it somehow took a weirdly serious twist. I had a random ridiculous-mental-image, got an encouraging response at just the wrong moment… And this resulted.
                By the way, when I originally got the idea, I (mistakenly) thought that a mongoose was a kind of weasel. Thirty seconds on

Comments

[amarisee]

Man! I feel proud that I could even slightly help!

This is too cute for words! And I think it does incorporate quite a few aspects of our discussion (I ended my comments at Part Twenty Three!)

Ah, I do agree that Sasuke may be content and at peace with seeing them, but he would be damned if he showed that to their face. Though the "Should have named you Naruto!" bit was right on target!!

OK, I *am* a pervert, but trying NOT to make any comments about the following:
- Midriff boy
- The shirts, the shirts!
- Orochimaru's issues with touching (and POSESSING) pretty boys...

But, ahem, the image of the whiskers tickling Sasuke have just given me more ideas...

[proanon]

I ended my comments at Part Twenty Three! *is not laughing* *is so not laughing* *is SO not laughing* ...BWA-HA-HAH! We really are beyond hope, aren't we? *grins and rubs hands together in gleeful anticipation*

Ah, I do agree that Sasuke may be content and at peace with seeing them, but he would be damned if he showed that to their face. Yeah... I don't like the second-to-last section all that much, honestly. Maybe I should re-write it from Sasuke's point of view. Sakura sort of shoved her way in for the post-battle scene, and then refused to let go. *grumbles a bit*

And midriff boy - oh, come on, you know that's the first thing that springs to anyone's mind when they see him. Usually followed by some variation on "Damn, but that's a tempting target

[amarisee]

He he... I've already ordered you the same white vest with the very long sleeves like mine... ^_~

Well there is nothing wrong with having Sakura-interaction in there. But I think you are right in wanting to keep this all from Sasuke's point of view. That way, the whole thing is more consistent. And also, even if it is more Sakura-focused in the end, she would expect no less than Sasuke being a tight clam as usual...

Yes, Midriff-boy. Well, you know I am not too fond of him, but, as I've said in my comments I believe, I do think it is a liability if you wear an outfit with huge target signs that read "VITAL ORGANS HERE, HERE and HERE".

As for ideas... Oh, I got plenty. I think I wrote some in my *gasp* 23 comments. Some of them really go on a tangent, sorry about that...

Sort of an affirmation-by-denial
Noooo! Don't get me started on that "denial" idea again!! *dies*

"Is Tachi a boy or a girl?" To which Sasuke just gave her a blank, "what-the-hell-does-that-have-to-do-with-anything?"
Erm... not that Sasuke is actually going

[proanon]

Liability doesn't BEGIN to describe it.

And about the comments... *coughs* I spent a huge chunk of my afternoon and evening responding... and I'm only half-way through #5. Maybe we should start paring it down a bit after all. *slices the words clean through* *cough* Nevermind that...

Noooo! Don't get me started on that "denial" idea again!! *dies* *laughs* Only in this case, we're talking about denial that is actually affirmation. :-P

(And why the heck should he check? He doesn't care. That's Tachi's business, not his.)

*shoots roommate*

[chem_nerd]

What, you told me to! *points up* Really neat story, even if I don't know the fandom.

Re: *shoots roommate*

[proanon]

*grins, slowly and evilly* So I did. And you keep telling me to flamethrower you/hit you with a big stick... *eyes the naginata in the corner pointedly* :-P

Glad you liked it - and glad it made some kind of sense to you. ^_^

Re: *shoots roommate*

[chem_nerd]

*ducks naginata* Forget I said anything... *looks around nervously for signs of fwooshing*

Loved It

[romyra]

Oh this was so sweet, I found it on askerian and I just about died from the cuteness. I adore ferrets they're just under cats in my book and well I think that you really did "Tachi justice. Love Grumpy Sasuke who doesn't want to care but still does about his pet. Loved the part when "Tachi attacked Orochimaru that was really funny and very cool.

Re: Loved It

[proanon]

^_^ My ego thanks you. And Tachi is begging for snacks. :-P

[azamaria_chan]

*grins* Sasuke and his weasel. But not that weasel. Tee hee. I love this. You did a wonderful job characterizating Team 7 and Orochimaru, even if it is a crackfic. Overall... this was awesome and Sasuke and Tachi are just too adorable!

[proanon]

^_^ Glad you liked it.

[proanon]

^_^

(...that is a PECULIAR icon. *blinkblinkblink*)