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FIREFLY--FIC: Bear Patches (slight Jayne/Kaylee if you squint)

May 31, 2008 15:12

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So first things first I guess- This is unbetaed! If someone wants to beta this *cool beans* if ya'll just wanna let me know if there are any fuck-ups that's cool too. Also just a quick mention here this is only my second Firefly fic ever, the first was my apocalyptothon one.

Title: Bear Patches
Rating: PG13 (For Jayne's language)
Fandom: Firefly
Summary: A ( Read more... )

my fic, firefly/ serenity fic

Comments 14

gitanne101 June 1 2008, 05:39:24 UTC

yay, Firefly!!!
I *heart* your Firefly Summer Drabble Series resolution!

I can beta this for you if you want/still need a beta.

*scurries away to unwrap her newly acquired 'The Dead Zone' DVD box set*

prncssflutterby June 1 2008, 05:48:22 UTC

yay, Firefly!!!
I *heart* your Firefly Summer Drabble Series resolution!
So ya like huh?

I can beta this for you if you want/still need a beta.
Hell yeah I could still use a beta. I really need someone to read over them and make sure that I'm not making any glaringly obvious mistakes- spelling- and I really suck at puntuation. So that will probably need looking at.

Which season of Dead Zone? I liked that show a lot but I kinda ended up missing out on later seasons...

gitanne101 June 1 2008, 06:28:32 UTC

Season one, I think it was the best season of the show. I didn't pay much attention to the other seasons.

I just sent you a msg with some suggested changes for the fic, see if you like.

prncssflutterby June 1 2008, 17:45:20 UTC

I've got the first couple episodes of first season on DVD but I haven't see the rest of season one for quite some time. But it is on my list of seasons I want the boxset for. (There's actually a lot of those!)

I'm checking over the changes now and I'll message you back about it in a minute...

strangevisitor7 June 4 2008, 04:18:53 UTC

Very nice Jayne voice. I do a lot of Beta work so just ask if you'd ever like me to look at something.

prncssflutterby June 4 2008, 04:33:00 UTC

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Yay you liked! I've figured out that Jayne's voice is the easiest for me. I could allllllllways use more help beta-ing things. I've always just done it myself or begged spikess to do it. Didja notice any mistakes in this one though?

I hoping to do the next "Firefly Summer Drabble Series" installment in the next week or two. It will be one for the second half of "Serenity (the pilot)" might even stay with Jayne's voice not sure yet.

BTW: I love that icon! Jayne is pretty!

strangevisitor7 June 4 2008, 04:43:44 UTC

Truthfully - I did not have my beta hat on. When I read for pleasure I just read - I really do read differently when I'm in Beta mode - that being said nothing jumped out at me.

prncssflutterby June 4 2008, 04:47:44 UTC

Well generally speaking "nothing jumpin out" means no major issues. I can alway find something wrong when I read my own stuff. It happens everytime I write a fic.

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abe16kidbosco July 19 2008, 12:59:07 UTC

That only took me a year to finally read! ;) Haha. Though I'm completely lost since I've never seen it, I still enjoyed it! I think it came out GREAT! Can't wait to read more. :D

prncssflutterby July 20 2008, 01:41:34 UTC

Not a year you silly girl! *snickers*

You should totally watch Firefly and Serenity!! Firefly is like 14 episodes and Serenity is the miracle feature length movie to conclude it after Firefly got canceled! Both are out on DVD now.

Thank You! Glad you liked it even if you've never seen it! I am planning more I'm just not sure when I'll post more.