FANFIC IN SPANISHEight Chapters for the moment and working in some more. If you understand spanish, take a look ;D it's fun, I swear.
CHAPTER 1 CHAPTER 2 CHAPTER 3 (Part 1) CHAPTER 3 (Part 2) CHAPTER 4 (Part 1) CHAPTER 4 (Part 2) A nice friend from fanfiction.net,
dan_heron , is traslating the whole thing for me. Btw english is NOT our mother laguaje, so if you guys can point the script errors, we'll be glad for it. I'm planning publish the fic in english in ff.net too, but we think it's better check the errors first. We gonna try to update the parts fast, but I can't press my friend with the traslation ^^; the chapters are a little large and still needs tons of editing.
SUMMARY
It all started with a Festival. The Pretty Cures know precious little about each other team but they all must come together as a new battle looms near. They can't decide to fight or flight, for their enemy already decided for them. A far more dangerous enemy that any ruler of Darkness. Yuri warning (you know girlxgirl).
PREVIOUSLY...
Black glanced at White and both nodded, making the same decision. In a powerful leap they placed themselves between Momoka and the incoming attacks, knowing there was no time to take the girl and move away. There was only one option.
“Don't move!” White shouted, taking her partner's hand and creating a dome of light around the civilian girl.
“This is so gonna hurt,” Black grumbled, earning an amused giggle from her partner.
There was an explosion and large pieces of debris were sent flying in every direction, trashing the place even more. In the crater left by the combined attacks, Black and White were holding an unconscious but unharmed Momoka. The girls themselves had been injured, the blood running down their faces and arms was testimony to that, but they didn't seem to be hurt beyond these cuts. Gently they put the girl down and then moved to the bottom of the amphitheater in two powerful steps.
“We will finish this in private, no public next time, this is just between all of you and us,” Black said with a surprisingly severe expression.
“We will meet again soon,” White said. “Please excuse us.”
Both girls took their donuts and books and left at high speeds, leaving the place in a sepulchral silence. Moonlight and Marine immediately went to check on Momoka, finding her safe but unconscious. The newcomers looked at the scene, not without feeling deeply ashamed of their recklessness.
“W-we are sorry!” Dream cried with deep regret, “Is she okay?”
“Yes, calm down,” Moonlight said in a tight but calmer tone, reassuring the newcomers.
“Maybe we should better leave and talk somewhere more private, yes?” Tart interrupted before anything else could be said. “We have so much to talk about.”
Chapter 5:
The Rainbow's Light (Part 1)
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The numerous group had gathered at Miki's house, luckily completely free for their use. The girl's mother was outside the city visiting some friends of hers and wouldn't be coming back until next monday.
They put Momoka in Miki's room to let her recover, she was remarkably unhurt but it was to be expected she would be unconscious after such extreme impact and the scare that should have suffered in the crossfire. Nozomi, Saki and the rest of the girls didn't stop apologizing, but since there was no harm there was nothing to forgive.
After many, many introductions they finally went down to the main topic: the fight against Black and White.
“The fact they risked themselves to save Momoka-san means that in the deepest part of their hearts they are still themselves,” Tsubomi said, clearly remembering the scene in her mind. “Whatever is controlling them hasn't managed to keep them completely under its power.”
“I think that may be way they haven't seriously hurt us so far, it's likely they are still under the Seal's effects,” Maid said to Love, Tsubomi and their teams, “the one that keep us from mortally wounding each other. Even if they don't hold back during the fights, they hadn't hurt us, so there's a chance of the Seal is still active.”
“First of all, we have to take Chiffon to a safe place they can't enter-coco,” said the small prince. “I think she may be the only thing they are truly after, they can't enter the Pretty Cure Palace or any of the other kingdoms without knowing where their entry is-coco.”
They talked some more about the issue and was decided to let Chiffon under Flora's care in the Cure Rose Garden since Syrup was the only one who could enter that secret place. There they would be completely safe and the girls could focus on fighting without worries. Kurumi offered to go with Syrup to take Chiffon with Flora in case anything happened. It was a simple precaution, but there was never enough precautions even if they knew their opponents lacked flight skills.
Nuts didn't waste time to provide everybody with new and personalized communicators so they all could be in contact at any time. Thanks to their magic, the new devices came with a little video screen and several options to allow communication to one of several girls at the same time. One never knew when a little detail may come handy.
“Passion, I'm afraid we will have to count on you the more at this point. Akarun will be very useful and we will need a way to move quickly when Black and White attack again,” Tart said to Setsuna.
“Leave it to me, I'll do my best, I promise,” Setsuna replied with complete certainty.
“Well, now that we have a plan, let's eat something! I'm starving!” Nozomi groaned.
“You're always hungry!” Rin muttered grumpily, but then her stomach decided to growl for food too. “Ok, you win. Let's eat something!”
“Miki-tan, let's make dinner like we had been planning to do,” Love said, her spirits back to her usual mood. “Bukki, Setsuna, let's buy some more ingredients, we'll have the best dinner for all of our new friends!”
“Let me go with you,” Karen immediately offered; it was lucky she always carried money with her. “We're far too many, and three of our team eat enough for four, each. We don't want to abuse your hospitality.”
“I'm coming too,” Komachi said right away, standing with Karen. “We'll bring plenty of food, the more help the better.”
“Okay, let's go!” Love smiled.
“Let me help too!” Itsuki immediately offered and soon the food gathering group left the house.
Those that remained got to talk about many things but the fight; despite the situation they wanted to get to know each other and become friends. Their schools, their families, where they lived, their hobbies, and just about any little detail was the theme of the conversation. It looked like chaos from the outside, but they all understood each other very well.
Yuri excused herself to go checking on Momoka. She knew her friend hadn't been hurt but she couldn't help worry about her.
Momoka slept placidly, very comfortable under the pile of blankets. Yuri sighed in relief and sat down next to her friend. She didn't bother turning on the lights, not wanting to disturb Momoka, but moonlight poured through the open curtains, giving Momoka an otherworldly charm, one Yuri felt victim to. Without thinking she delicately brushed a few stray strands of hair from Momoka's face, trying to not waking her up.
“I'm sorry,” she murmured in a quiet voice, “I couldn't protect you from that fight,” she let her fingers trace the other girl's cheeks.
Momoka opened her eyes, placing her hand over the hand touching her cheek.
“I'm the one who should be apologizing,” she said, making Yuri gasp in surprise. “I knew it was a very dangerous situation and yet I didn't go far away enough. I was reckless and made things harder for all of you, I'm very sorry Yuri.”
“Momoka...”
“I'll apologize to the others when we go down,” she gave Yuri a sweet smile, still keeping Yuri's hand in her grasp.
“Does anything hurt?” she asked, unable to brush off her worries. “Your head, anything on body?”
“No, nothing hurts, calm down,” she laughed, sitting up. “Those girls protected me with their bodies, and the impact was minimum... it felt as if somebody had shoved me down, that's all.”
“Are you sure?” the bespectacled girl insisted, taking Momoka by her cheeks.
The model nodded several times, a charming smile on her face. She looked around noticing they were alone, the door was closed and the moon was their only witness. It was just perfect. She grabbed Yuri's arms and then let herself fall back on bed, taking Yuri down with her; the taller girl remained on top with eyes wide open in surprise as a blush crept up to her face.
“Momoka...” Yuri managed to say with great effort, completely bewitched by a pair of eyes of sky blue.
“Just a little,” she said in a sweet tone and kissed the girl on top of her.
The kiss started gently, Momoka marking the rhythm while Yuri let herself be lead, as it always happened in those moments of intimacy. The model threaded her fingers through Yuri's hair, and took a hold of the back of her neck, caressing gently and she felt, with particular joy, the goosebumps on her partner's skin in answer to her touch. Yuri couldn't help sighing and Momoka took advantage of that to invade Yuri's mouth with her tongue and deepen the kiss even more.
Yuri gasped, unable to keep from moaning and Momoka hugged her tightly, pulling her closer, caught in the passion of the moment. After a couple minutes Yuri finally managed to get free and sat on the bed, face completely red and sporting an adorably serious and blushing look.
“Momoka, we can't do this in another person's house,” she said in a strict tone, fixing her glasses.
“I know, but I like how you get when I do it anyway,” the model giggled, earning another blush from her girlfriend. “What we go down? I owe the girls an apology and I need to talk with Miki-chan about some things.”
“Okay, but Miki-san went out to buy food for the dinner with some of the girls. I'm not sure if they are back or-.”
With a quick and playful movement, Momoka pinned Yuri against the bed. The bespectacled girl blushed again, seeing the smile on the other girl's face.
“Then we can go down once they get back, then I will be able to apologize to everybody at the same time,” Momoka said, placing her hands at both sides of Yuri's head.
“Momoka, we can't...” Yuri managed to mumble.
“We won't do anything,” her girlfriend smiled and got comfortable on top of the taller girl. “It's just, your body is very comfortable and I need to rest a little bit more. I'm still a bit tired. Your chest is the most comfortable place I know, so...”
“Momoka...”
Without another word, Yuri got comfortable herself and embraced the other girl gently.
“Okay, let's go down once they return.”
“Thank you.”
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In the living room there was a little and everything of chatting, laughs and some mayhem. Mai was going through Erika's sketches, giving her some color tips, and even took the chance to draw Miki in some of the models already sketched. Tsubomi talked animatedly with Rin about flowers after Rin mentioned about her family owning a flower shop. Saki, Nozomi and Urara talked about food once Saki mentioned her family owned a very famous bakery in her district; Nozomi and Urara promised to visit her soon.
Meanwhile the magical beings held their own gathering in another room. There were things the girls didn't need to hear about, they were warriors and they fairies were the ones who needed to make sure the girls could fight without worries. Without wasting any time, Syrup and Milk took little Chiffon and left in direction of the Cure Rose Garden; there was no time to lose now that they knew Black and White were more than capable of creeping on them without notice. It was a small blessing these two Cures couldn't fly too.
Twenty minutes after the food brigade finally arrived and the din of the dinner was spectacular. However, they made sure that many of the girls, particularly Nozomi and her friends, didn't set a foot in the kitchen thanks to Coco's warnings about the quintet's culinary feats. Saki and Mai helped in the kitchen along with Love, Setsuna, Inori and Miki while the rest set the table.
When everything was ready Momoka and Yuri finally came down, the former with a genial and happy look, the later looking down with a crimson blush on her face, almost as if she were cranky about something
“Girls?” The model called for everybody's attention. “I have to apologize for what happened during the fight, it was very reckless of me,” she said in a clear voice, bowing at everybody.
“You shouldn't apologize, Momoka-san,” Nozomi said with a wide smile. “It was very dangerous, and luckily nothing happened, but thanks to you we found out our partners Black and White aren't completely bad. They risked themselves to save you and they wouldn't have done so if they were completely controlled. If we fight with everything we have, we will be able to get them back!”
“Anyway, just don't put yourself in danger again, Momo-nee!” Erika said with a look of reproach.
“Okay, I won't scare you like that again,” the girl said with a smile.
“Momoka-san, could you notice anything about them?” Karen asked. “I know that the situation you found yourself in was a difficult one, but anything you can tell us will help us greatly.”
“Well,” the model hummed for a moment. “When they protected me, White told me to not move and Black said something about how it was going to hurt them. Then the impact came, I only felt as if I had been shoved around, but before I lost consciousness I could see them. They were resisting with everything they had, and once they saw I was fine they smiled at me and told me to be more careful.” This revelation caused everybody to smile too.
It was definitive now, they could get the duo back if they managed to fight their own instinct and fight them at the hundred percent of their skills. During the dinner Milk and Syrup came back from their mission, Chiffon was safe now with Flora. The night went by without further incident, and when it was getting late the girls went back to their homes with a little help from Setsuna and her Akarun. Next day the photo shot would take place as it had been scheduled. They doubted that after the attacks they endured protecting Momoka Black and White would be in fighting condition to try a new attack so soon.
At least they hoped so.
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Once they made it back to their district, the first thing Nagisa and Honoka did was fall on their faces in the latter's garden. They undid their transformation, still feeling sore all over. The cases with Mepple and Mipple laid on the ground a few steps away from them, but there was no sign any of the two would react any time soon.
“Everything hurts...” Nagisa murmured, face planted firmly against the grass.
“At least she's safe,” Honoka replied in a conciliatory voice.
“Maybe it wasn't such a good idea receive the attacks full on....”
“I was thinking about that a while ago. We need to be more careful next time, or it could get dangerous.”
Nagisa managed to drag herself to her feet and helped Honoka to stand up; they took Mipple and Mepple and placed them on Honoka's desk. Both made a bee line for the bathroom and took a bath. There was no wound or scratch on their bodies even though they had been bleeding at the moment of the attack; their injuries had already closed on their own, but the bruising and the pain remained. It had been a serious attack and they had been weakened due to the previous attack. Maybe they were being too reckless.
Now in the bedroom Nagisa only managed to put the pants of Honoka's pajamas and laid face down on her partner's bed. Honoka sat on top of Nagisa's hips and started to apply first aid analgesic. The long haired girl was just as sore, but since a while ago she was able to endure the pain very well and her bruised back and limbs weren't much of a problem. The only relief Honoka needed lately was being in touch with Nagisa and both knew it.
“Better?” Honoka asked with a smile, feeling her partner relaxing under her hands.
“Yeah, feels much better. If we take a break tomorrow I'll be as good as new by Monday,” Nagisa murmured with a smile firmly in place.
“Tomorrow we have to do our homework, we were outside three days and I don't want to do everything at the last hour like the last time,” she said with a strict tone.
“Honoka... you know in what situation we are in,” she complained with a frown, “and you still want us to think about the school's homework. That's a part of you I'll never get.”
“So says the girl with the drive for food and chocolate,” Honoka murmured in her defense, laying down on top of Nagisa's back. “I know what situation we are in, but you're the one who keep saying we shouldn't give up on our civilian life. We have to make the most of the time we still have, Nagisa.”
“I know....”
The fell in a comfortable silence, Honoka had her face pressed against Nagisa's hair and her hands held onto her partner's shoulders. The athlete only managed to hold one of Honoka's hands and take it to her lips gently; she still had the taste of medicine on her hand and that didn't have the nicest taste but Nagisa didn't mind. They enjoyed the close contact for a while longer before Honoka stood up, sighing deeply in relief.
“Do you feel better?” Nagisa asked once she felt the weight of her partner lifting off her back to move at her side, both still holding hands.
“Yes, thank you,” she smiled. “I'll close the door, it's late and getting chilly,” she said right away, standing up and moving to the bedroom's door.
As soon as everything was dark and in silence and both girls were under the covers, Honoka sought after the closeness to her partner. Nagisa received her in her arms and both were happy simply by intertwining their fingers and bumping their foreheads. Little by little their faces got closer and their lips touched with feather light caresses, light and gentle care, almost like the brush of a feather.
“What's next?” Nagisa asked with her eyes closed.
“If we want a real fight we will have to do something more than just provoking them into a fight,” Honoka replied and a smile grew on her face. “They think we're going after the important things, right?”
“That's what they said.”
“Then go for them and maybe some more,” continued the girl genius. “If our friends can't feel motivated enough to fight us with everything, then what we're doing will be for nothing. They have to be ready for when we....”
“Shh, don't say any more,” Nagisa interrupted her, holding her tightly. “Don't even think of saying it, I don't want to think about... that.”
“Nagisa...”
The dark haired girl hugged Nagisa back and gave her a deep kiss, one the athlete answered without thinking, almost with urgency and desperation. Honoka however took the lead, setting the rhythm of the kiss in every moment, managing to calm down her partner. After a brief pause they exchanged an intense look and they started kissing again, this time a kiss full of desire and frantic caresses.
“Honoka... I love you,” the girl managed to say between gasps.
“I love you too, Nagisa,” her girlfriend replied with a tender look and a sweet tone.
That was the beginning of a long night, one where they showed the intense and pure love they felt for each other. Even though their mutual love filled their thoughts at the moment, they couldn't help but thinking about the other very special and powerful bond that they had found out about not too long ago. It was that bond that kept them against wall even during that moment of love.
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Why in half parts? Cause the chapters are VERY LARGE for the 10,000 characters limit for a LJ post.
Read and enjoy. From my fangirl heart for you, guys. Remember, of you don't like yuri ^^; just don't flame so much, please. But, if you don't mind at all, then feel free to read it.
Oh, yeah! Our dear hen_yo is drawing scenes from the fanfic, the first ones (still) needs just color:
interview scene
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d116/DekaEve/Scene1.jpgSoccer Game scene
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d116/DekaEve/Scene2.jpgSaki and Mai scene
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d116/DekaEve/Scene3.jpg If someone haves good coloring skills, is welcome!
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