3510: Happily Ever After - Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny

[pottersues]

Don't forget about Tropes Sue Week either. I'm looking for help finding entries for said week. I'm also looking for some feedback on this.

TITLE: Happily Ever After
PERPETRATOR: hinnyronmionescrose
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Comments

[grimmhooke]

Hinny and Romione sound like diseases.

[yemi_hikari]

If the pairing name doesn't sound like a disease it sounds like a porn star's name. That's the way it is for the vast majority of pairing names regardless of the fandom.

[darth_gojira]

For me, they definitely are

[yemi_hikari]

The writer's got to be young. The indication is Harry/Ginny, and Ron/Hermione didn't sleep with each prior to being married, but the writer also notes the couples share rooms. The only reason one would do that as a couple long term is if sex is involved.

Then there is forcing Molly and Arthur out of their house of many years instead of having the kids work for their own place. That's just plain disrespectful, and make the kids seem like louses.

I've always struggled with my "willing suspense of disbelief" in regards to stories where the brother freaks out because his sister's husband knocked her up. It makes more sense if there is abuse going on, but everythings way to perfect for that.

[darth_gojira]

This sounds like something Rowling would write if she forgot how to.