2440: Elf: A Story of Discovery - Lympie/Lily

[pottersues]

Don't forget about Tropes Sue Week either. I'm looking for help finding entries for said week. I'm also looking for some feedback on this.

TITLE: Elf: A Story of Discovery
PERPETRATOR: Breathtaking Chaos
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Comments

[yemi_hikari]

The writer needs to plan out their stories more, but they also need to learn there is an actual logic to the plot lines of well written stories.