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[pottersues]

Here is day Z

TITLE: The Story of Liz Bower, the rewrite The Story of Liz Bower and the second rewrite .
PERPETRATOR: Zociac
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Comments

[maniacaleddddd]

Im glad shes willing to rewrite, id rather have a bad writer who tries than a mediocre writer who doesnt give a crap. maybe with enough rewrites this'll move up through the ranks and become "ok!" XP

[yemi_hikari]

Sadly the story was written back in 2000. But yeah, it's these kind of writer's you have a lot of hope for.

[ladysugarquill]

Well, the writing itself is not that awful. Maybe she'll improve :)

[yemi_hikari]

I looked at the stories again, and apprently she was influenced by EDS, the writer of Eliza Diwana Snape series. I think that's how the middle name was spelled. There is something else that is familiar about the stories that I can't place my finger on, and I'm not sure if it's because the story is close to EDS's, or if I'd seen similar stories written by other people. It's the second two, not the first that I feel this way mind you.

[darth_gojira]

Not terrible. Just very very bleah