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[pottersues]

There are only three days left to get your Golden Bubotubers nominations in! I've received more nominations, but all of the categories are still very empty!

TITLE: The Girl Who No One Saw
PERPETRATOR: Sayuri Kaoru
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Comments

[ayaneva]

Wait...how did the man find her to take her to the orphanage if no one could see her? And how did she exist in the orphanage? I mean, she'd have to have a bed, eat, etc. but no one can see her so... I think I missed something. brb re-reading the sample.

[yemi_hikari]

By invisable, she means not invisable, but not standing out, because until her powers surface at age fourteen, she's going to look like a mousey brown haired little girl. She looks like that because of a glamour like we see in a good deal of the Hermione Granger make over fanfics. Aka, make her seem not special at first, then make her very special, when truth of the matter is, she was always special.

[ayaneva]

OIC I was really confused for a second there.

[anisetheghosted]

...gentle ducky locks of chocolate brown, shot with deep luscious reds and shining golds...

All I could think was, "What the hell does she write on personal description forms?"

And this form of wishful self-insert is a bit more painful than most, I think: "...dreading the day she would no longer be invisible..."? That's...wow. All sorts of personal issues to work through, here.

[wolkenser]

Hahahahaha I just imagined her going to the DMV trying to fill out the form for her license and the people trying to fit that onto the card.

[yemi_hikari]

Good grief, she is majorly beautiful, but isn't seen that way because of a glamour put over her and yet she can see how beautiful she is and she pines away about how she is happy not being noticed and how she fears that when everyone sees her beauty, she'll no longer be invisable, aka people will start noticing her.

She acts like it is so bad to be noticed to be a half breed, when Fluer had no problems being noticed. In fact, she had mostly postitive experiences. The only time I remember her having people against her was when the Weasly's thought she had charmed her future husband into loving her and that she only loved him for his looks. Of course, I doubt Angel breed will be anywhere near as vain.

I also don't buy the whole, you're ugly... then bam... BEAUTIFUL thing. HP is not fairy tale. It's a LOT more realistic.

[turtle_yurippe]

How can mortals even kill an angel?

[instrumentality]

With an Evangelion?

/is bricked

[ayaneva]

LOL IRL

[instrumentality]

SO GLAD someone got that =DDD

[instrumentality]

Because I have a one-track mind, I choose to imagine her as an Evangelion angel. One of the really strange-looking ones. Maybe the big, flat one with the three eyes. SO SEXY!