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Guys, this self-insert is so cute and innocent I can't rate it worse than "bad". It was borderline "okay", but the prose just couldn't warrant an "okay".
Sue #4! All caught up!
TITLE: My first christmas with Harry potter
PERPETRATOR: harrypottersgirlfriend18
SUE-O-METER:
(bad)
FULL NAME: Missy
SPECIES: Witch
HAIR: not described
EYES: not described
MARKINGS: none described
POSSESSIONS: an engagement ring.
ORIGIN: Apparently she an Harry have been a couple for a while, and we are getting a glimpse of their first Christmas together.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Is dating/engaged to Harry Potter. She is on friendly terms with Ron and Hermione
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Likes to say Harry's full name.
NOTES: The phrase "adult fun" makes me giggle like crazy. Just read the whole story it's adorable in a "still bad" sort of way.
SAMPLE:
Harry had come home from work to see Missy dectioning the Christmas tree that they got together for there first Christmas together.
“Hey there honey, how are you doing.” Harry said
“ I’m putting on the new dections on the tree baby.” Missy said
He kissed her then went to go get change so he can help her with the rest of the dectioning.
He started to put on put on the wearth on the door and then went to help missy with the tree.
Harry grabed missy waist and started to kiss her neck to get her to stop so they could have some adult time.
“ Harry potter stop your going to make me drop this.” missy said giggling
“ Hey you did promise me that we could have some adult fun time when I got home from work.” Harry said
“ Ok we will have some adult fun time now.” missy said
Missy put down the decertion and harry pulled her to there room to have some adult time and they stayed there all night.
Next day
Harry had the next few days from work so that he can spend time with missy.
They where on the couch when the fire went green and Ron and Hermione came thought the fire.
“ Hermione, Ron why are you here.” Harry said
“ We came to give you both your gifts silly.” Ron said
“ Oh sorry” both of them said
“ We can’t stay long because we are going to the burrow for Christmas this year.” Hermione said
They gave them their gifts and said merry Christmas to them both and the left thought the fire again to leave the couple to themselves again.
They went and put there gifts under the tree and then the went to there room to get themselves some sleep.
Sue #4! All caught up!
TITLE: My first christmas with Harry potter
PERPETRATOR: harrypottersgirlfriend18
SUE-O-METER:
(bad)
FULL NAME: Missy
SPECIES: Witch
HAIR: not described
EYES: not described
MARKINGS: none described
POSSESSIONS: an engagement ring.
ORIGIN: Apparently she an Harry have been a couple for a while, and we are getting a glimpse of their first Christmas together.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Is dating/engaged to Harry Potter. She is on friendly terms with Ron and Hermione
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Likes to say Harry's full name.
NOTES: The phrase "adult fun" makes me giggle like crazy. Just read the whole story it's adorable in a "still bad" sort of way.
SAMPLE:
Harry had come home from work to see Missy dectioning the Christmas tree that they got together for there first Christmas together.
“Hey there honey, how are you doing.” Harry said
“ I’m putting on the new dections on the tree baby.” Missy said
He kissed her then went to go get change so he can help her with the rest of the dectioning.
He started to put on put on the wearth on the door and then went to help missy with the tree.
Harry grabed missy waist and started to kiss her neck to get her to stop so they could have some adult time.
“ Harry potter stop your going to make me drop this.” missy said giggling
“ Hey you did promise me that we could have some adult fun time when I got home from work.” Harry said
“ Ok we will have some adult fun time now.” missy said
Missy put down the decertion and harry pulled her to there room to have some adult time and they stayed there all night.
Next day
Harry had the next few days from work so that he can spend time with missy.
They where on the couch when the fire went green and Ron and Hermione came thought the fire.
“ Hermione, Ron why are you here.” Harry said
“ We came to give you both your gifts silly.” Ron said
“ Oh sorry” both of them said
“ We can’t stay long because we are going to the burrow for Christmas this year.” Hermione said
They gave them their gifts and said merry Christmas to them both and the left thought the fire again to leave the couple to themselves again.
They went and put there gifts under the tree and then the went to there room to get themselves some sleep.