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0015: More Than You Think You Are - Harriet Potter

Apr 19, 2003 22:35

Why, why, why, WHY?!

TITLE: More Than You Think You Are
PERPETRATOR: ShanniC

SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)

WRITING:

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rating - toxic, pb - taco-show, pf - severitus' challenge, sw-o - quanonreip, stu - harry potter, pc - not-a-skywalker, rom - none, pc - parasite sue, related to snape, y - hogwarts years (1 - ps/ss), p - hino (harry/hermione in name only), rom - severus snape, rom - lily potter, pa - au doesnt excuse the impossible, ship - severus/lily, pa - au - what if logic fail

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pottersues April 20 2003, 09:08:45 UTC

I thought you were female...

dawndragon April 19 2003, 22:26:14 UTC

"Harry" being a female I don't have an issue with, but being the daughter of Snape??!!! ACK! And calling herself Harry sounds a bit off. But the Harry-character being the daughter of SNAPE?!!!! That's just...yuck!

dawndragon April 19 2003, 22:29:23 UTC

Plus, the writing isn't well done. She sounds like she summarized and exaggerated everyone to get in the main ideas, and then added some strange ideas of her own. And she seems to pretty much completely lack Harry's internal burning anger at being mistreated. It's like it's nothing to her.

abbiemills April 19 2003, 22:49:09 UTC

Please God...remove this horror from my brin... ¬.¬;

iczer6 April 20 2003, 08:16:52 UTC

dontgiveahoot April 21 2003, 05:46:43 UTC

>>This is an answer to Severitus' challenge. There is a twist I have yet to see anyone write. What if Harry Potter was born a girl, and discovered Severus Snape was her biological father?>>

Okay I don't know who this Severitus person is but they have to be stopped. Severitus is a writer on ff.net, aka the Pit Of Voles. She issued a challenge - make Harry find out, on his sixteenth birthday, that one way or another, James is not his biological father, Snape is. The way of this happening - Lily cheating on James, Snape raping Lily, Imperio, Snape secretly donating sperm for James' infertility as a favour to Lily blah blah - whichever way you chose. The thing was, Lily had performed a charm on Harry to make him look like James (hence, why everyone comments that Harry looks so like his father) but it's set to wear off when he turns sixteen and 'old enough to know the truth'. Whether or not Snape actually knows (or even suspects) that Harry is biologically his is another thing left up to the imagination ( ... )

sal_thedeceiver April 20 2003, 08:44:45 UTC

Stupid-arse AU's that should never be attempted, part 37: Make Harry a girl and Snape his (her?) daddy!

*Bangs head on keyboard*

Maybe a list of stupid AU's *should* be compiled... >__

pottersues April 20 2003, 09:08:22 UTC

Are you crazy? Somebody would find it and write them!

Re: sal_thedeceiver April 20 2003, 10:10:56 UTC

Good point, the 'Sues are always craftier than one expects....

I know people who can offer mini-Balrogs and mini-Aragogs for guard purposes!