1497: An Alternate Adventure-Goblet of Fire - Harry and Amanda "AJ" Potter
Today's Sue has almost 3000 reviews. *thumbs down*
Thanks Jenn for sending in her First Harry Potter Mary-Sue! It's a two-for-one, and I'm sure all the minions are loving that deal.
TITLE: An Alternate Adventure-Goblet of Fire
PERPETRATOR: Slytherin-nette
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
FULL NAME: Harry and Amanda "AJ" Potter
SPECIES: Wizard/Witch
HAIR: AJ has "silky, raven-black hair". As for Harry's hair: "His raven hair, which back then had used to be unruly and wild, was now elegantly tamed and styled to perfection unless he chose to occasionally style it into wild, intentional spikes on his head, giving him that much lusted after bad boy look which seemed to turn girls into pudding." *vomit*
EYES: they both have emerald green eyes. AJ's sparkle
MARKINGS: AJ is beautiful, even Harry thinks so. She has a delicate face.
POSSESSIONS: Huge egos. AJ still has her V-card.
ORIGIN: A Draco fangirl writes an AU about Goblet of Fire. In it, the Potter twins go to Hogwarts, befriend Draco and then have the plot turn into Cruel Intentions.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Draco befriends Harry and "AJ". The twins are sorted into Slytherin. The story is set in fourth year. For the Cruel Intentions part, Draco makes a bet with his bad-ass BFF Harry that he can't seduce innocent Hermione. Of course Harry will fall for Hermione. AJ is smarter than Hermione. AJ to be paired with Draco, but Draco thinks she might be falling for Ron or Cedric. Crouch!Moody puts her to sleep and only her true love, Draco can wake her.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: They can express "seduction, perfection and confidence".They can throw the word "Mudblood" around like it doesn't apply to them. Harry is extremely attractive.
NOTES: Jenn says it best: "So yeah, the whole story is quite the Mary Sue for a first one. It’s actually not completely horrible writing, despite being really wordy and repetitive, having purplely flowery descriptions and ripping scenes and plot directly from Cruel Intentions. It’s engaging and campy enough that I read most of it (I skimmed through paragraphs of repetitive angst) and its kind of hilarious. I really want to shake this girl for thinking that these “bad boys” are romantic and sexy, and that smirking all the time is sexy, and for her characters blatant snobbery and her assertions that pretty, wealthy people are allowed to be assholes and will still be adored, and for her Hufflepuff and Neville hating. Gahh!"
SAMPLE
"Harry?"
14-year-old Harry James Potter looked up to see his fraternal twin sister, Amanda Jane Potter looking at him, her emerald green eyes wide with concern as she peered intently into his eyes.
Harry gave her a reassuring smile and shook his head, tucking a strand of her silky, raven-black hair behind her ear. Harry had to marvel at his twin sister's remarkable resemblance to him. Her silky hair, now long enough to fall below her shoulders framed her delicate face beautifully. Several strands occasionally fell into her sparkling emerald green eyes.
Her pale skin looked like porcelain in the darkness of their bedroom like him, her lips were as red as the reddest rose. She was such a beautiful sight to look at and Harry couldn't have been prouder of having such a beautiful girl as his twin sister. It was no wonder that the Slytherin girl made all the boys at their school turn their heads when she walked in the room.
Hell, it was no wonder that Harry himself made the entire female population in Hogwarts swoon every time he passed them.
Harry Potter, the sexy, notorious Slytherin, was known as one of the hottest guys in the entire school of Hogwarts Witchcraft and Wizardry.
He could have gotten any girl he wanted, being the seductive, dark angel he was known to be. His emerald green eyes were always enchanting, always intense and penetrating that when they looked at a person, that person's knees would end up buckling under the gaze.
His raven hair, which back then had used to be unruly and wild, was now elegantly tamed and styled to perfection unless he chose to occasionally style it into wild, intentional spikes on his head, giving him that much lusted after bad boy look which seemed to turn girls into pudding.
His lean, slightly muscular physique made girls' eyes eye him up and down as he walked through the halls and his dark, sinister and bad-boy reputation just added much more to his allure.
It seems the Potter twins were recognized not only for their scars after all. Both being in Slytherin, they had developed an air of aristocracy and elegance about them. If anything, being in Slytherin had helped them develop new ways to express seduction, perfection and confidence which was always recognizable within a Slytherin student.
Over the years, they grew to be popular around the entire school not because of their history of defeating the dark lord but also for their remarkable beauty and strange endearing charisma.
Why wouldn't they be? They were the twins-who-lived through Voldemort’s reign of terror… That alone had earned them much more respect from the Wizarding world than they ever would have realized.
Despite their rather nasty behavior towards other people however, the twins were very affectionate towards each other. Probably because they've had to rely on each other since birth and being fraternal twins, they shared a special bond that they shared with no one else.
However, in school, Harry was just simply known as a cold-hearted bastard… There was no other word for it… Someone who did not care about anyone's feelings… Someone who simply did not give a damn about the world around him… A true Slytherin…
Sure, he saved a lot of lives and he knew his role as the ever-so-loved hero in the wizarding world but being a hero and saving lives does not necessarily mean being a noble, what he liked to call, softie, to him.
He seemed to take pride in his appearance as well; very much aware of the benefits he could use with his stunning good looks… Because frankly, he went through girls faster than he went through hairstyles.
At such a young age, he had slept with a fair number of girls in their third and second year and had gone through a lot of girlfriends at that point.
However, despite his complete disregard for women, he loved his sister much more than he loved himself. She was the only girl he had ever cared and looked after. Nothing would ever change that. It was a side to Harry Potter that he only showed to his sister alone.
It’s amazing how everything’s changed since we came to Hogwarts… He thought, a wry smirk forming onto his lips. Harry thought of how the two of them had gone through their previous years.
From first year, they had been sorted into Slytherin and they had met their best, most loyal friends in that house.
Harry's best friend, Draco Malfoy, was the other popular Slytherin boy in their group and was as equally notorious and admired as Harry was himself, the two of them spending so much time together.
He and Harry had more than half the females in school lusting after them and at the same time had all the males fearing their wrath.
They were known as the popular Slytherin duo, Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy… No one dared to cross their wrath of defy them… No one dared to go against them because with the combination of both boys’ magical and physical abilities, no one actually stood a chance.
Green-eyed Potter and silver-eyed Malfoy, true Slytherins at heart, always roaming the school with those trademark sneers on their faces as they sought trouble after trouble, professors and students eyeing them warily whenever they passed by…
Draco Malfoy was no definitely pushover, that was for sure. He was as powerful and as cold or ruthless as Harry was… And in some aspects, Harry refused to admit, Draco could be much colder than he ever was…
With the same dark and mysterious aura around the handsome, silver-blonde and the same intense, penetrating eyes, Harry and Draco were the kind of duo that made the younger years squirm when in their presence…Feared and Admired at the same time.
Draco sure gets his own action… Harry thought, chuckling to himself as he thought of the girls that had all been trying to get into Draco’s pants their previous year.
It was plain and simple really… If the girls in school weren't lusting after Harry, they were lusting after Draco.
Sleek, silver blonde hair which shined in the moonlight, beautiful, dazzling silver eyes, a lean, toned physique, and sexy, predatory confidence, Draco was easily any girl's fantasy come true.
Though he was not as fast and as consistent as his best friend when it came to bedding girls, he certainly did get his fair share over the years.
The thing about Draco was that he only spoke a decent, civil conversation to three people alone.
Three people, the first being Harry, who was the only one Draco actually respected and seemed to recognize as more powerful him, Harry being the leader in their Slytherin group after all.
The second one was AJ whom Harry had discovered that Draco seemed to fancy ever since he had developed strong feelings toward her in their first year. It was quite obvious that Draco was crazy about his sister but he never admitted his feelings for her before.
It was strange that after being so confident with so many girls that Draco couldn’t seem to muster up the courage after all these years to admit his feelings for AJ… He never had the same courage when it came to the raven-haired girl…
The third one of course, was Blaise Zabini, another Slytherin boy who was in turn, AJ's best friend.
Aside from those three and Prof. Snape, Draco insulted and tormented just about everyone he met up with, being the Malfoy that he was.
Draco especially hated the Gryffindors, which was why he was always known as an insufferable, obnoxious, spoiled git to them from the very start.
Harry didn’t know why but his best friend had always been picky about the people he interacted with, refusing to even talk to people whom he believed were inferior compared to him…
Maybe it was because he was a Malfoy and his father was Lucius Malfoy, former death- eater and rich aristocrat.
Draco and his entire family had always turned his nose up at muggle-born wizards or people who were not "up-to-his-standards", as he would occasionally say.
Instead of reprimanding him about it as everyone would expect, Harry found this particularly amusing. It was definitely no wonder why he and Harry were best friends.
They were on the same wavelength… Two halves of the same stone… Birds of the same feather… It was quiet obvious that despite the animosity between them, they directed a level of respect towards each other that they gave no one else… Sort of like a brotherly fondness…
Harry and Draco were always seen together with their two cronies, Vincent Crabbe and Gregory Goyle, who were always acting as their bodyguards or plainly just their stupid followers.
Their gang of Slytherins was always the cause of intimidation among other students. Harry would always be recognized as the leader and Draco gladly affirmed to that, proud of being the great and powerful Harry Potter's best friend.
Sometimes Harry and Draco would be seen on either side of AJ and the Slytherin trio would strut around the school as if they owned the place, no doubt something planned that would cause trouble.
AJ, in comparison, hung around with Blaise and sometimes, when she felt like it, another Slytherin, Pansy Parkinson, her friend after Blaise.
Blaise was also a very rich, pure-blooded wizard who liked to believe that every girl would want to get into his pants. Of course he was also good-looking, having gray eyes and raven hair, which were always spiked on his head with blonde highlights.
While Harry and Draco were known as silent antagonists- cold, dark and mysterious and feared by others, Blaise was known as loud, rude and obnoxious who loved to badmouth everyone that got on his nerves. He especially liked to pick on the Hufflepuffs.
Throw aside the horrible nasty, cold attitude to the other houses and his wild tendency to trip every Hufflepuff that passes his chair, Blaise can be a really cool and considerate friend. He was even a witty, charming and charismatic gentleman but people rarely got to see that side of him very much.
The reason he was her best friend was because. Well.. He could understand her. Though not as much as Harry but Blaise was able to understand AJ in a special way that only best friends did.
He may be a jerk in public but once other people did not see them, he could be very sweet and caring. He only acted horribly that way in front of other people but to AJ, he was almost like another brother to her. She could tell him all her problems and he would just listen.. Give advice and comfort her. It was the Blaise Zabini that no one else knew about.
Slytherins have always never showed their sensitive side to anyone else without their consent… They thought of it was a weakness to be ashamed of… They never wanted anyone to realize that underneath that horrible personality, there was a human clamoring to be set loose.
Well, maybe except for Parkinson…Harry thought, sneering to himself as he thought of his former girlfriend.
Pansy Parkinson had a horrible reputation of being the Slytherin slut. Harry had already used her body countless times before and she just keeps believing that he loves her though Harry completely blows her off rudely afterwards.
Draco had even taunted her once as "Harry's Bitch" which Harry had just smirked to and had ignored altogether while Pansy chose to regard the comment as a compliment.
Girls in Slytherin are way too easy most of the time anyway…Harry thought snobbishly, wrinkling his nose as he thought of the girls in his house in slight disdain. After a while, he tended to get bored with them… They gave in way to quickly…
Well, all except AJ of course, which Harry was definitely grateful for… However, AJ never really did blend in much with the other Slytherin girls… Almost as if she didn’t even belong in Slytherin at all…
She refused to taunt the other houses if she could help it and most of the time, she was the one who tried to restrain her housemates from doing anything drastic to anyone else…
Most shocking of all was probably the fact that unlike her friends, AJ Potter was still a proud virgin- pure, innocent and has never been tainted…
Her morals much were higher as she had even admitted to Harry once that she strongly believed in saving herself for the one she really loved. She hadn’t even gotten into any sort of relationship yet, which Harry had made sure to.
Even though he was a playboy and went in and out of relationships, he was extremely strict with his younger twin, though only by a measly five minutes, and makes sure no guy got to close to her without waking up in the hospital wing.
It annoyed AJ that her brother disrespected girls in relationships yet he did not allow his sister to date anyone believing she might get hurt in the process. Harry was the reason that instead of attracting guys, they were terrified of asking AJ out or making any sort of moves on her because of their fear of Harry beating them up.
AJ only had one crush however. Ever since first year and that was redheaded Gryffindor, Ronald Weasley.
Ron had grown into a looker himself over the years. Now being the Gryffindor seeker ever since second year, he had grown quite athletic.
He was slightly lean from the Quidditch training but unlike the other boys, he was as tall as hell. He was even taller than both Harry and Draco though only by an inch or so. His red hair was shiny and wavy and his blue eyes were always sparkling with mischief, always making AJ's emerald eyes glaze over.
His trademark grin made her swoon at the sight and his easygoing personality made her love him even more. She had always had a thing for him, ever since their first year but she had told no one except Blaise, who liked to tease her constantly.
AJ never really found out why she liked him so much. He wasn't really what she would call, a "knock-out" like Harry or Draco, though his looks did earn him occasional admiring glances every now and then.
He was always tall and lanky and his muscles were not as firm as that of the other boys she knew. He was not even that smart since she knew he flunks a number of classes several times.
Maybe the thing she loved about him was his…His bravery… His courage… Being a Gryffindor probably.. She didn’t know why but those Gryffindor qualities attracted her very much…
After all, Ron had surprisingly helped Harry in their second year in the chamber of secrets when his sister, young Ginny Weasley had gotten kidnapped.
The sad part was, the only time Ron had ever looked back at AJ was when he was glaring at her with utmost loathing and hatred which she obliged to return along with a sneer similar to that of her twin's.
That was the reason AJ had always been jealous of Hermione Granger. In her own opinion, she saw that Ron might have a thing for her and that was also the reason why AJ had always tormented Granger whenever she had the chance to.
Hermione Anne Granger was the smartest witch in their whole year, which really pissed AJ off because she had been the second smartest in the year ever since she started Hogwarts. Hermione had always found a way to be higher than her at academics.
The most frustrating part was, she was only higher by a couple of points, around 3 or 2 which meant that they were more or less the same level but Granger was just always higher in numerical standings and beat her in every subject there was…
Because of this, Granger had always been AJ's number one rival and her archenemy and taunting her in the halls was one of the things she enjoyed and prided herself in doing.
Ron, however, was not the safest person to have a crush on, him being Harry's archenemy and all.
Harry had exchanged Ron's friendship for Draco's in their first year when he had accepted Draco’s hand of friendship on the Hogwarts express and Ron had never forgiven him for that. Not that Harry cared since he and Ron liked to pick fights with each other occasionally.
Ron and his best friend, Seamus Finnegan, would be the Gryffindor alternative of Harry and Draco and would do anything in their will to foil any scheme of the Slytherins. Ron and Seamus were not as proficient and charming with the ladies as
Harry and Draco were but they were as tough and as daring as the two any day.
Their main advantage to the duo was their Gryffindor bravery, which Harry and Draco will obviously never possess… It was that particular trait which earned the two Gryffindors respect from the other students as well…
Thanks Jenn for sending in her First Harry Potter Mary-Sue! It's a two-for-one, and I'm sure all the minions are loving that deal.
TITLE: An Alternate Adventure-Goblet of Fire
PERPETRATOR: Slytherin-nette
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
FULL NAME: Harry and Amanda "AJ" Potter
SPECIES: Wizard/Witch
HAIR: AJ has "silky, raven-black hair". As for Harry's hair: "His raven hair, which back then had used to be unruly and wild, was now elegantly tamed and styled to perfection unless he chose to occasionally style it into wild, intentional spikes on his head, giving him that much lusted after bad boy look which seemed to turn girls into pudding." *vomit*
EYES: they both have emerald green eyes. AJ's sparkle
MARKINGS: AJ is beautiful, even Harry thinks so. She has a delicate face.
POSSESSIONS: Huge egos. AJ still has her V-card.
ORIGIN: A Draco fangirl writes an AU about Goblet of Fire. In it, the Potter twins go to Hogwarts, befriend Draco and then have the plot turn into Cruel Intentions.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Draco befriends Harry and "AJ". The twins are sorted into Slytherin. The story is set in fourth year. For the Cruel Intentions part, Draco makes a bet with his bad-ass BFF Harry that he can't seduce innocent Hermione. Of course Harry will fall for Hermione. AJ is smarter than Hermione. AJ to be paired with Draco, but Draco thinks she might be falling for Ron or Cedric. Crouch!Moody puts her to sleep and only her true love, Draco can wake her.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: They can express "seduction, perfection and confidence".They can throw the word "Mudblood" around like it doesn't apply to them. Harry is extremely attractive.
NOTES: Jenn says it best: "So yeah, the whole story is quite the Mary Sue for a first one. It’s actually not completely horrible writing, despite being really wordy and repetitive, having purplely flowery descriptions and ripping scenes and plot directly from Cruel Intentions. It’s engaging and campy enough that I read most of it (I skimmed through paragraphs of repetitive angst) and its kind of hilarious. I really want to shake this girl for thinking that these “bad boys” are romantic and sexy, and that smirking all the time is sexy, and for her characters blatant snobbery and her assertions that pretty, wealthy people are allowed to be assholes and will still be adored, and for her Hufflepuff and Neville hating. Gahh!"
SAMPLE
"Harry?"
14-year-old Harry James Potter looked up to see his fraternal twin sister, Amanda Jane Potter looking at him, her emerald green eyes wide with concern as she peered intently into his eyes.
Harry gave her a reassuring smile and shook his head, tucking a strand of her silky, raven-black hair behind her ear. Harry had to marvel at his twin sister's remarkable resemblance to him. Her silky hair, now long enough to fall below her shoulders framed her delicate face beautifully. Several strands occasionally fell into her sparkling emerald green eyes.
Her pale skin looked like porcelain in the darkness of their bedroom like him, her lips were as red as the reddest rose. She was such a beautiful sight to look at and Harry couldn't have been prouder of having such a beautiful girl as his twin sister. It was no wonder that the Slytherin girl made all the boys at their school turn their heads when she walked in the room.
Hell, it was no wonder that Harry himself made the entire female population in Hogwarts swoon every time he passed them.
Harry Potter, the sexy, notorious Slytherin, was known as one of the hottest guys in the entire school of Hogwarts Witchcraft and Wizardry.
He could have gotten any girl he wanted, being the seductive, dark angel he was known to be. His emerald green eyes were always enchanting, always intense and penetrating that when they looked at a person, that person's knees would end up buckling under the gaze.
His raven hair, which back then had used to be unruly and wild, was now elegantly tamed and styled to perfection unless he chose to occasionally style it into wild, intentional spikes on his head, giving him that much lusted after bad boy look which seemed to turn girls into pudding.
His lean, slightly muscular physique made girls' eyes eye him up and down as he walked through the halls and his dark, sinister and bad-boy reputation just added much more to his allure.
It seems the Potter twins were recognized not only for their scars after all. Both being in Slytherin, they had developed an air of aristocracy and elegance about them. If anything, being in Slytherin had helped them develop new ways to express seduction, perfection and confidence which was always recognizable within a Slytherin student.
Over the years, they grew to be popular around the entire school not because of their history of defeating the dark lord but also for their remarkable beauty and strange endearing charisma.
Why wouldn't they be? They were the twins-who-lived through Voldemort’s reign of terror… That alone had earned them much more respect from the Wizarding world than they ever would have realized.
Despite their rather nasty behavior towards other people however, the twins were very affectionate towards each other. Probably because they've had to rely on each other since birth and being fraternal twins, they shared a special bond that they shared with no one else.
However, in school, Harry was just simply known as a cold-hearted bastard… There was no other word for it… Someone who did not care about anyone's feelings… Someone who simply did not give a damn about the world around him… A true Slytherin…
Sure, he saved a lot of lives and he knew his role as the ever-so-loved hero in the wizarding world but being a hero and saving lives does not necessarily mean being a noble, what he liked to call, softie, to him.
He seemed to take pride in his appearance as well; very much aware of the benefits he could use with his stunning good looks… Because frankly, he went through girls faster than he went through hairstyles.
At such a young age, he had slept with a fair number of girls in their third and second year and had gone through a lot of girlfriends at that point.
However, despite his complete disregard for women, he loved his sister much more than he loved himself. She was the only girl he had ever cared and looked after. Nothing would ever change that. It was a side to Harry Potter that he only showed to his sister alone.
It’s amazing how everything’s changed since we came to Hogwarts… He thought, a wry smirk forming onto his lips. Harry thought of how the two of them had gone through their previous years.
From first year, they had been sorted into Slytherin and they had met their best, most loyal friends in that house.
Harry's best friend, Draco Malfoy, was the other popular Slytherin boy in their group and was as equally notorious and admired as Harry was himself, the two of them spending so much time together.
He and Harry had more than half the females in school lusting after them and at the same time had all the males fearing their wrath.
They were known as the popular Slytherin duo, Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy… No one dared to cross their wrath of defy them… No one dared to go against them because with the combination of both boys’ magical and physical abilities, no one actually stood a chance.
Green-eyed Potter and silver-eyed Malfoy, true Slytherins at heart, always roaming the school with those trademark sneers on their faces as they sought trouble after trouble, professors and students eyeing them warily whenever they passed by…
Draco Malfoy was no definitely pushover, that was for sure. He was as powerful and as cold or ruthless as Harry was… And in some aspects, Harry refused to admit, Draco could be much colder than he ever was…
With the same dark and mysterious aura around the handsome, silver-blonde and the same intense, penetrating eyes, Harry and Draco were the kind of duo that made the younger years squirm when in their presence…Feared and Admired at the same time.
Draco sure gets his own action… Harry thought, chuckling to himself as he thought of the girls that had all been trying to get into Draco’s pants their previous year.
It was plain and simple really… If the girls in school weren't lusting after Harry, they were lusting after Draco.
Sleek, silver blonde hair which shined in the moonlight, beautiful, dazzling silver eyes, a lean, toned physique, and sexy, predatory confidence, Draco was easily any girl's fantasy come true.
Though he was not as fast and as consistent as his best friend when it came to bedding girls, he certainly did get his fair share over the years.
The thing about Draco was that he only spoke a decent, civil conversation to three people alone.
Three people, the first being Harry, who was the only one Draco actually respected and seemed to recognize as more powerful him, Harry being the leader in their Slytherin group after all.
The second one was AJ whom Harry had discovered that Draco seemed to fancy ever since he had developed strong feelings toward her in their first year. It was quite obvious that Draco was crazy about his sister but he never admitted his feelings for her before.
It was strange that after being so confident with so many girls that Draco couldn’t seem to muster up the courage after all these years to admit his feelings for AJ… He never had the same courage when it came to the raven-haired girl…
The third one of course, was Blaise Zabini, another Slytherin boy who was in turn, AJ's best friend.
Aside from those three and Prof. Snape, Draco insulted and tormented just about everyone he met up with, being the Malfoy that he was.
Draco especially hated the Gryffindors, which was why he was always known as an insufferable, obnoxious, spoiled git to them from the very start.
Harry didn’t know why but his best friend had always been picky about the people he interacted with, refusing to even talk to people whom he believed were inferior compared to him…
Maybe it was because he was a Malfoy and his father was Lucius Malfoy, former death- eater and rich aristocrat.
Draco and his entire family had always turned his nose up at muggle-born wizards or people who were not "up-to-his-standards", as he would occasionally say.
Instead of reprimanding him about it as everyone would expect, Harry found this particularly amusing. It was definitely no wonder why he and Harry were best friends.
They were on the same wavelength… Two halves of the same stone… Birds of the same feather… It was quiet obvious that despite the animosity between them, they directed a level of respect towards each other that they gave no one else… Sort of like a brotherly fondness…
Harry and Draco were always seen together with their two cronies, Vincent Crabbe and Gregory Goyle, who were always acting as their bodyguards or plainly just their stupid followers.
Their gang of Slytherins was always the cause of intimidation among other students. Harry would always be recognized as the leader and Draco gladly affirmed to that, proud of being the great and powerful Harry Potter's best friend.
Sometimes Harry and Draco would be seen on either side of AJ and the Slytherin trio would strut around the school as if they owned the place, no doubt something planned that would cause trouble.
AJ, in comparison, hung around with Blaise and sometimes, when she felt like it, another Slytherin, Pansy Parkinson, her friend after Blaise.
Blaise was also a very rich, pure-blooded wizard who liked to believe that every girl would want to get into his pants. Of course he was also good-looking, having gray eyes and raven hair, which were always spiked on his head with blonde highlights.
While Harry and Draco were known as silent antagonists- cold, dark and mysterious and feared by others, Blaise was known as loud, rude and obnoxious who loved to badmouth everyone that got on his nerves. He especially liked to pick on the Hufflepuffs.
Throw aside the horrible nasty, cold attitude to the other houses and his wild tendency to trip every Hufflepuff that passes his chair, Blaise can be a really cool and considerate friend. He was even a witty, charming and charismatic gentleman but people rarely got to see that side of him very much.
The reason he was her best friend was because. Well.. He could understand her. Though not as much as Harry but Blaise was able to understand AJ in a special way that only best friends did.
He may be a jerk in public but once other people did not see them, he could be very sweet and caring. He only acted horribly that way in front of other people but to AJ, he was almost like another brother to her. She could tell him all her problems and he would just listen.. Give advice and comfort her. It was the Blaise Zabini that no one else knew about.
Slytherins have always never showed their sensitive side to anyone else without their consent… They thought of it was a weakness to be ashamed of… They never wanted anyone to realize that underneath that horrible personality, there was a human clamoring to be set loose.
Well, maybe except for Parkinson…Harry thought, sneering to himself as he thought of his former girlfriend.
Pansy Parkinson had a horrible reputation of being the Slytherin slut. Harry had already used her body countless times before and she just keeps believing that he loves her though Harry completely blows her off rudely afterwards.
Draco had even taunted her once as "Harry's Bitch" which Harry had just smirked to and had ignored altogether while Pansy chose to regard the comment as a compliment.
Girls in Slytherin are way too easy most of the time anyway…Harry thought snobbishly, wrinkling his nose as he thought of the girls in his house in slight disdain. After a while, he tended to get bored with them… They gave in way to quickly…
Well, all except AJ of course, which Harry was definitely grateful for… However, AJ never really did blend in much with the other Slytherin girls… Almost as if she didn’t even belong in Slytherin at all…
She refused to taunt the other houses if she could help it and most of the time, she was the one who tried to restrain her housemates from doing anything drastic to anyone else…
Most shocking of all was probably the fact that unlike her friends, AJ Potter was still a proud virgin- pure, innocent and has never been tainted…
Her morals much were higher as she had even admitted to Harry once that she strongly believed in saving herself for the one she really loved. She hadn’t even gotten into any sort of relationship yet, which Harry had made sure to.
Even though he was a playboy and went in and out of relationships, he was extremely strict with his younger twin, though only by a measly five minutes, and makes sure no guy got to close to her without waking up in the hospital wing.
It annoyed AJ that her brother disrespected girls in relationships yet he did not allow his sister to date anyone believing she might get hurt in the process. Harry was the reason that instead of attracting guys, they were terrified of asking AJ out or making any sort of moves on her because of their fear of Harry beating them up.
AJ only had one crush however. Ever since first year and that was redheaded Gryffindor, Ronald Weasley.
Ron had grown into a looker himself over the years. Now being the Gryffindor seeker ever since second year, he had grown quite athletic.
He was slightly lean from the Quidditch training but unlike the other boys, he was as tall as hell. He was even taller than both Harry and Draco though only by an inch or so. His red hair was shiny and wavy and his blue eyes were always sparkling with mischief, always making AJ's emerald eyes glaze over.
His trademark grin made her swoon at the sight and his easygoing personality made her love him even more. She had always had a thing for him, ever since their first year but she had told no one except Blaise, who liked to tease her constantly.
AJ never really found out why she liked him so much. He wasn't really what she would call, a "knock-out" like Harry or Draco, though his looks did earn him occasional admiring glances every now and then.
He was always tall and lanky and his muscles were not as firm as that of the other boys she knew. He was not even that smart since she knew he flunks a number of classes several times.
Maybe the thing she loved about him was his…His bravery… His courage… Being a Gryffindor probably.. She didn’t know why but those Gryffindor qualities attracted her very much…
After all, Ron had surprisingly helped Harry in their second year in the chamber of secrets when his sister, young Ginny Weasley had gotten kidnapped.
The sad part was, the only time Ron had ever looked back at AJ was when he was glaring at her with utmost loathing and hatred which she obliged to return along with a sneer similar to that of her twin's.
That was the reason AJ had always been jealous of Hermione Granger. In her own opinion, she saw that Ron might have a thing for her and that was also the reason why AJ had always tormented Granger whenever she had the chance to.
Hermione Anne Granger was the smartest witch in their whole year, which really pissed AJ off because she had been the second smartest in the year ever since she started Hogwarts. Hermione had always found a way to be higher than her at academics.
The most frustrating part was, she was only higher by a couple of points, around 3 or 2 which meant that they were more or less the same level but Granger was just always higher in numerical standings and beat her in every subject there was…
Because of this, Granger had always been AJ's number one rival and her archenemy and taunting her in the halls was one of the things she enjoyed and prided herself in doing.
Ron, however, was not the safest person to have a crush on, him being Harry's archenemy and all.
Harry had exchanged Ron's friendship for Draco's in their first year when he had accepted Draco’s hand of friendship on the Hogwarts express and Ron had never forgiven him for that. Not that Harry cared since he and Ron liked to pick fights with each other occasionally.
Ron and his best friend, Seamus Finnegan, would be the Gryffindor alternative of Harry and Draco and would do anything in their will to foil any scheme of the Slytherins. Ron and Seamus were not as proficient and charming with the ladies as
Harry and Draco were but they were as tough and as daring as the two any day.
Their main advantage to the duo was their Gryffindor bravery, which Harry and Draco will obviously never possess… It was that particular trait which earned the two Gryffindors respect from the other students as well…