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4205: The Rise of New Darkness - Aaron Zakhorov

Mar 25, 2018 20:32

Title: The Rise of New Darkness
Perpetrator: aaron.zakhorov
Sue-O-Meter: Toxic
Cover/Banner Art: Their avatar is this green AMD thing.
Summary: “Four years after the Dark Lord's disappearance, a new prophecy foretelling the coming a new Dark Lord emerges. Dumbledore rushes to act on it. Has he succeeded? Or has he fallen for the same trap as ( Read more... )

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Comments 12

auregan March 26 2018, 16:38:42 UTC

I know that Dumbledore was in a fight against evil with Lord Voldemort, but I think that trying to kill an infant and his family is way out of character.

This is a character that I think replaces both Voldemort and Harry Potter? I've read enough to deduce as much, but I am not certain what to really make of this. It would be an interesting storyline. A new dark lord is rising up out of the unknown after Lord Voldemort is defeated. However, this is too much, I think.

yemi_hikari March 27 2018, 17:22:59 UTC

Agreed.

I'm not sure if the storyline would be interesting, because being both screams Gary Stu. This isn't to say someone might not be successful.

yemi_hikari March 27 2018, 17:25:12 UTC

I honestly don't think a prophesy would actually predict someone becoming evil. That's a bit cruel even for a prophesy.

ext_4600874 April 6 2018, 04:11:02 UTC

That was actually the point. It said he's a dark lord not an evil lord. But most people (in the story) don't really grasp the difference thanks to Voldemort's reign of terror. And Lol I didn't think it would get a toxic on the sue-o-meter

pottersues April 6 2018, 04:43:36 UTC

I'm not sure whether to point out the fact there is no difference in canon, or whether to ask if you were purposefully trying to get the toxic rating on Pottersues without getting caught and given a troll rating instead. If you're not familiar with the blog, then you likely don't get that going the dark powers issue is yet another issue, but explain the second question simply as some who follow do attempt getting featured here without getting noticed ( ... )

ext_4600874 April 6 2018, 06:59:42 UTC

This is actually the first time I've come across pottersues. An anonymous person mentioned in the reviews that my story was featured here.

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darth_gojira May 2 2018, 13:31:35 UTC

(groan)