3643: Aenegael - Aenegael "Andi" Haggerty

[pottersues]

- The link of the day is Daryl Romances Rant.
- Flashback Sue

TITLE: Aenegael
PERPETRATOR: SaavikBowie
SUE-O-METER: Awful
COVER/BANNER ART: None
SUMMARY:”Andi Haggerty is starting her first year at Hogwarts. Or rather, her sixth. After a mix-up with her Hogwarts letter, Andi finally starts school at Hogwarts at 16. Befriended by the Weasley

Comments

Re: Your Review

[anonymous]

Hey! So I wrote this story and I just wanted to say thank you very much for the feedback. I have made some revisions to my story since you posted this, but you have pointed out some really important flaws with my storyline. You have encouraged me to go back to the beginning of my story and properly establish why Andi's letter didn't come. I also agree that upon reflection, she doesn't seem to have any special ability. I am going to make sure that from now on (and maybe with some further revision to the beginning) that she is more of a dynamic character.
Thanks again for the feedback, it was really helpful.
-SaavikBowie (I have since changed my fan fiction handle to Kit Auralee and may be found there. The story is now called "Late Letter" because I find simpler titles are better than complicated ones.)

Re: Your Review

[pottersues]

You're welcome.

[darth_gojira]

I'm really tired of that cliche.