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Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 8

Dec 22, 2007 21:40

Title: Middle of Nowhere

Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.

Thanks: To smilesalot. Thank you for taking time to look at this chapter. You may want to cover your eyes though, for fear of the dreaded POV scenarios. Thank you also to Keren for your support.

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poppyhoney_67 December 22 2007, 22:49:43 UTC

Hi Lindsey, thanks for such a great comment, I was really nervous about the bj, hoping it sounded hot and sexy instead of boring and clinical! Very relieved now.

Isn't Meli fab? I love writing her, she says everything I'd say. Or you. Or other certain girls we know.

Thanks for commenting and reading, and have a great christmas too!!

sweetje December 22 2007, 23:06:56 UTC

I can hardly wait to see the place Meli has in mind for Jack and Ennis's renezvous. I think that, if our boys don't get together soon, one or both of them will explode. ; )
I'm anxious to see what Ennis is creating for Jack's birthday in the workshop. I just know it's going to be something very special, something that will show Jack Ennis's true feelings for him.
I love this story more with every chapter you post. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. : )
Debra

poppyhoney_67 December 28 2007, 22:02:43 UTC

Hi Debra, thanks for your comment. So glad you are enjoying the story. Won't be long before the next chapter, hopefully.

tmn1966 December 22 2007, 23:07:23 UTC

This chapter was so perfect! I was so glad that Ennis took things a step farther with Jack. I can understand him wanting to be cautious though because they are responsible for a bunch of young impressionable kids.

So glad they have Melie on their side. Hope they can work something out soon because I don't think Jack could handle it.

I really enjoyed this chapter and you did a fantastic job with it!

Teri

poppyhoney_67 December 28 2007, 22:03:32 UTC

Hi Teri, you are so right about Jack. He can't handle it, and its good he's got Ennis to help calm things down, well as much as he can! Thanks for your comment, glad you are enjoying the story.

jacquelinetwist December 22 2007, 23:48:20 UTC

What a beautiful story!! I'm so happy for your update!!Thank you and best wishes for Christmas!!
Jackie

poppyhoney_67 December 28 2007, 22:04:01 UTC

Hi Jackie, thanks for your comment, so glad you are enjoying the story. Happy Christmas to you, if a little late.

big_heart_june December 22 2007, 23:50:01 UTC

This was an unexpected lovely long Christmas treat, Christine! YAY!!
Aw, I loved how Ennis was straight away on the lookout for Jack when coming back to camp ♥ And OMG Christine the gorgeous way you wrote Jacks wonderfully sweet and hot words to his Ennis made me feel weak and giddy too. Really. You wrote that perfectly. I loved it, loved what he said to Ennis ♥
Jack not wanting Ennis to shower and getting so turned on by his smell was fucking hot...phew..
I loved this part:

this was Ennis giving him this, his own silent cowboy who had said so little about his feelings, but when he did, oh boy when he did, it was like he was reciting a whole book of love poems, because two words out of Ennis were like five hundred out of anyone else. And here he was, saying the most important words of all, as if by doing this, he was saying, "I know, and I feel and want it too."Beautiful. I also loved how Jack reassured Ennis afterwards. You write them so well together, I can feel the love and tenderness so clearly and it's beautiful ( ... )

poppyhoney_67 December 28 2007, 22:04:58 UTC

Hi June, sorry to hear you've been ill, and so glad that you enjoyed my story. I always love your comments because you are so true to how you feel, makes me feel great! Hope you are feeling better.