Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 8

[poppyhoney_67]

Title: Middle of Nowhere

Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.

Thanks: To smilesalot. Thank you for taking time to look at this chapter. You may want to cover your eyes though, for fear of the dreaded POV scenarios. Thank you also to Keren for your support.

Comments

[fridayblues]

Hi:)
Thank you for the loooong, satisfying update. I have been pretty nervous throughout the chapter because Jack seemed he couldn't hold the longing for Ennis anymore. I thought I understand how Ennis is feeling, wanting to be with Jack, but is afraid that someone would suspect. They are in an early state of the relationship. And at their age, I think they just want to jump each other bones all the time LOL But they have to be patient here. I can't imagine how hot and hard loving they would have once they are alone *droooool*
I adore the scene you have the boys in :) I know they would lean a lot about themselves through being with the kids. I'm waiting for Justine to open up.
And it's official now, Meli is an angel :) And it's great to see Ennis relax around her bit by bit because she sure is their true friend.
Well, 2 days until Christmas! Hope you have a wonderful day on Christmas!
xxx Blues xxx

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Blues, oh so such a lovely comment, thank you. Yes, things can get tense when Jack is so desperate for Ennis, makes things exciting though, dont you think? Meli is great, I agree, a good friend to have. Ennis likes her a lot. Happy Christmas to you, if a little late.

[poppyhoney_67]

hi Ann, Jack so cannot wait! Thanks for your comment and happy new year to you too.

[queenb87]

amazing chapter! I love the two of them together. :)

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi queenb87, thanks for your comment, so glad you liked the chapter. It means so much. Thanks for reading. Oh and I love your icon!

[mariez65]

Christine, your J&E are so sweet and endearing (and hot!) it's a joy to spend time with them. Jack wanting to assure Ennis that he's special and Ennis wanting so badly to please Jack. I love Meli, of course; I'm glad they have a friend and confidant, because Cindy seems bound and determined to cause trouble. I feel so sorry for Justin and I'm glad he has the affinity for Ennis that Jack noticed. Great job. Thanks!

Marie

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Marie, thanks so mcuh for your lovely comment, Ennis and Jack are adorable, I agree, I love the fact that they want each other so badly. And Meli is a great friend to have. Thanks for reading!

[canteatnocake]

Loved this chapter!! Especially loved Ennis getting caught sniffing Jack's shirt, and the incredible BJ he gave Jack in the workshop. Ennis's true feelings for Jack really came through in this chapter. And he's making something for Jack's birthday, too! Thanks for the wonderful Christmas present.

[poppyhoney_67]

Hey cannoteatcake, so glad you liked the chapter. Ennis sniffing Jack's shirt is something I've wanted to write for a long time. Thanks for your comment and for reading.