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How's My Driving?!

Aug 29, 2011 01:10

H.M.D.?!
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laura bitesvampires August 29 2011, 08:20:42 UTC

Player name: Laura
Characters played: William Herondale :: The Infernal Devices :: bitesvampires
Personal concrit link: Here.
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Yes.
Other comments? MY ACTIVITY HAS BEEN AWFUL, I'm so sorry. I'm trying to work on it, and I'll definitely improve! I've also been feeling a bit - unsure about my characterisation recently, so I'm planning on giving the book a re-read shortly and. Going from there. Hopefully that'll help with my activity, as well.

shall_yield_us August 29 2011, 08:49:36 UTC

I AM V. GLAD YOU GAVE WILL A SECOND SHOT, he is most hilarious engaging and hilarious fun to read and hilarious squishy. Naw, seriously, he's really easy to tag off, he's interesting, and I like that you're not afraid to show he's a bit of an arrogant twit, and a bit more set in his ways. Flaws definitely give flavour. So, good... job, from the canon-blind gallery?

...and this is coming from someone who swore to never touch Cassie Claire-related anything on pain of... something and so you know my love must be pure!

bitesvampires August 29 2011, 09:03:21 UTC

LMAO yeah, I- am more than prepared to admit that there are problems with her writing and that the book isn't actually that great, but I quite enjoyed the characters so gjsvk /MAKES NO SENSE. I GUESS IT'S KIND OF LIKE A TWILIGHT THING FOR ME?

THAT ASIDE I'm glad that he's entertaining and easy to tag off. THAT IS WHAT I AIM FOR. And flaws. He's just made of flaws.

shall_yield_us August 29 2011, 09:07:16 UTC

45y8e34ihwe no, yo, I read, like. THE WEIRDEST STUFF too, no judgment here.

Yours is but a noble goal :( b

bitesvampires August 29 2011, 10:39:05 UTC

and I shall strive to continue (gym)

likeboudica August 29 2011, 09:11:05 UTC

You already know that I love your Will a lot. I think your characterisation is spot on - you really bring across his arrogance and the walls he has around himself and even the homg teenage angst while making him hilarious and fun and brilliant, so... PLEASE BE MORE ACTIVE *_*

bitesvampires August 29 2011, 10:24:59 UTC

I AM. WORKING ON IT 8( I'm just a tremendous flake and jfdklg it's harder than I imagined to overcome my flakiness (bah) BUT I WILL DO IT ONE DAY sobbing

but i'm glad you enjoy my will, at least jgdj

heelsandlaw August 29 2011, 17:19:08 UTC

I WILL WAIT PATIENTLY

and love on your Will in the meantime. Yes.

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IGNORE THE JOURNAL egotrippings August 29 2011, 20:17:11 UTC

oh my gosh, I totally adored that thread so much - and I'm really glad that people are willing to give me a chance and tag me after I disappeared for like, a month and a half sobbing. BUT I WILL IMPROVE (gym)

and lmao, I totally don't blame anyone for not wanting to read her books

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Re: laura bitesvampires August 30 2011, 13:31:18 UTC

thank you so much (cozy)

Re: laura 7thborn August 30 2011, 03:02:46 UTC

Laaaaaura! So I tagged Will the first time completely out of the blue, just completely drawn in by your gorgeous writing (no, really). It was such a wonderful and pleasant surprise to get such a great thread out of that first interaction between him and Ginny, omg. There’s just something about him that rubbed her the wrong way, enough to get more of her Gryffindor temper out, but not nearly enough to have her back down and now she views him as something as a challenge than someone she just dislikes. In fact, I was so intrigued by your characterization of him that I went out and bought the book - and I have read Cassandra Clare’s books before so I was familiar with the canon but not the character. And having your Will in mind as I read made the book so much more enjoyable. *___ ( ... )

Re: laura bitesvampires August 30 2011, 08:45:35 UTC

oh my gosh, this is the nicest thing to wake up to ever. I'm just sat here like

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I AM SO LATE forgive me 7thborn September 2 2011, 04:06:45 UTC

... sob well, Cassandra Clare is a special brand of... special. Though she does make for entertaining and quick reads over summer holidays. |D;;; And like I said, I enjoyed the book because I had all this depth from your William to put into that one, which sounds... sort of backwards, now that I think about it, but that's how it felt. >>

I REALLY REALLY ENJOYED THE PIRATE LOG. I look back to it sometimes because it's just like ...no one in the City has really infuriated Ginny quite so much so quickly and it is SO IMPRESSIVE, Will, sob I love it. And hush, I will backtag something for as long as I'm able, and I totally understand weird timezones and crazy schedules so really, never hesitate with me if you're tagging something late. I WILL HIT IT BACK. 8) And shh, I didn't even notice the book thing, it's totally fine. >>

OH PISH POSH YOU ARE LOVELIER, LAURA. Their crazy hilarious and snarky dynamic is my favourite and yes, creep forever. Do the creep.

m(o_____o)m

Re: laura specifics August 30 2011, 04:31:51 UTC

DON'T know the canon. HAVE immensely enjoyed just READING his threads which I always think is a good sign, also enjoyed threading with him and hope to do so again!!!!

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