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polgarawolf

Star Wars work in progress You Became to Me

Dec 22, 2006 23:00

Sixty-third part of a work in progress
Title: You Became to Me (as suggested by avari_maethor)
*Pairing: Mainly Anakin/Obi-Wan with some mention of Padmé
Rating: Uhm, probably a borderline PG-13/R-ish except for the last scene, which is more like a very strong R.
Disclaimer: I do not own the lovely boys from Star Wars, more's the pity! What I do have is an ( Read more... )

you will not stop me., trust your feelings!, . . . dying a little bit each day . . ., fear of loss is a path to the dark side., . . . a new hope . . ., let go of everything you fear to lose, do or do not. there is no try., . . . not this crude matter., how is that possible?, you can't stop the change., the force will be with you . . . always., there's been a disturbance in the force, . . . i love you . . . i know., we are encouraged to love, be mindful of your thoughts . . ., . . . luminous beings are we . . ., anger fear aggression...the dark side..., kenobi & skywalker - anakin & obi-wan, the force is . . . an energy field . . ., i will do anything you ask . . ., help me . . . you're my only hope, don't be afraid., the circle is now complete.

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spartan_117 December 23 2006, 23:24:04 UTC

I'm going to leave this chapter til after christmas sweets so I can concentrate on it and give it the attention it needs. It's so hard to concentrate on anything with the tv going 24/7 and driving me banana's inbetween all the fighting over what to watch etc........

I just didn't want you to think I was ignoring this chapter or anything *worries anyway*

polgarawolf December 24 2006, 06:38:54 UTC

Ah, that's okay. It's been next to impossible to get anything written in the WiP this week because of Christmas even though I thought I'd have more time to write with the whole no work thing. Who knows when I'll actually get the silly thing finished? *Sighs resignedly* Besides, this chapter has the other half of a development that I fully expect to give people headaches (or to make them angry). It and the previous chapter will probably read better after the Christmas madness is over with. *Nods*

PS - Is your icon taken from the bit in the film where Anakin goes up the turbolift, by any chance?

spartan_117 December 24 2006, 22:15:53 UTC

Oooh ok in that case I'll wait for you to finish this part and re-read the last chapter with this one.

Yup tis the bit where he says 'Always on the move' and sighs

polgarawolf December 25 2006, 00:12:42 UTC

I should get a bit more written tonight, hopefully, since we had our Christmas Eve celebration with the immediate family early. But I won't promise anything about the chapter being done until maybe the day after Christmas, though I hope to get it done Christmas day after presents and all.

*Giggles* I thought I recognized that look. That's in one of the bits I actually like in that movie. Almost all of their interaction up until the point when Dooku knocks Obi-Wan out just amuses me to no end. They just bicker and carry on like such an old married couple! *Lol!*

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gildinwen December 25 2006, 15:27:08 UTC

hee!!!!!they do don't they, which is what makes the ending so heartbreaking. course in my personal opinion, the fight on Mustarfar??? wasn't a fight between Jedi and Sith. It was a horrible vicous(sp?) break-up between two people who loved each other so much, but just couldn't see past their differences. Heck when Anakin screams "I HATE YOU!!!" it has more passion in it than all of the Anakin-Padme scenes put together, and when Obi-Wan yells "I LOVED YOU!!!" my jaw just dropped.
Anyhoo back on topic. I Loved how Anakin makes his case for what he did to the twin's genetic code to Obi-Wan, and how Obi's touched by the gesture and eventually, gives in? i guess. And i loved the refernce to the OT with the "Certain point of view" lines. Just classic!!
Oh ummm if these comments of mine are too long just say and i will shorten them. *Grin*

polgarawolf December 26 2006, 00:47:45 UTC

They're not too long. Don't worry about that. I love comments! They let me know people are still reading the WiP ( ... )