Star Wars work in progress You Became to Me
Sixty-third part of a work in progress
Title: You Became to Me (as suggested by avari_maethor)
*Pairing: Mainly Anakin/Obi-Wan with some mention of Padmé
Rating: Uhm, probably a borderline PG-13/R-ish except for the last scene, which is more like a very strong R.
Disclaimer: I do not own the lovely boys from Star Wars, more's the pity! What I do have is an ( Read more... )
Title: You Became to Me (as suggested by avari_maethor)
*Pairing: Mainly Anakin/Obi-Wan with some mention of Padmé
Rating: Uhm, probably a borderline PG-13/R-ish except for the last scene, which is more like a very strong R.
Disclaimer: I do not own the lovely boys from Star Wars, more's the pity! What I do have is an ( Read more... )
Ah, yes, Mustafar. The break-up scene to end all break-up scenes. *Shudders* That has to be one of the more horribly painful scenes in all of movie history, IMHO. I can't watch it without crying. And wanting to seriously hurt people (Yoda, Sidious, Qui-Gon, etc.).
Awww, thank you! I'm glad you like it, as that means it's believable to other people that things are turning out this way. And I'm proud of Obi-Wan for not arguing about it, even though he is embarassed and feels bad for Padme and doesn't quite feel like he deserves it and all of that. I think it's a good sign. Obi-Wan needs to learn to accept things like the fact that he's worthy of being thought good enough to be a father to the twins, and the fact that he kept himself from arguing makes me feel quite hopeful.
And I love working in lines like the "certain point of view." It's probably a good thing I don't have an actual printed list of classic SW lines and sayings from the OT films, or I'd be trying to work them into the WiP every time I turned around. *Giggles*
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