Title: Summer Boy
Author:
teafortwelve (Tara)
Rating: G
Verse: Gen V, Gameverse.
Characters: Black/White
Summary: His summer ends when she leaves. It's as simple as that.
Author's Note: Comments and crits are loved. <3 This will probably be completely OOC for them when the games are released, but for now, just take their characterizations as my personal
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despite knowing next to nothing about black & white, somehow this feels really in-character for them - black as the small town boy and white as the beautiful, adventurous stranger <3
/already ships them way too hard
it also fits in with the theme really well, so... bonus points! haha
mijumaru could not be cuter ; u;
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Haha, yes, that's the same sorta impression I got from them. x3 They're too sweet together, imo, because of that difference in personality.
Mijumaru is my one & only, lol. ;~;
Thanks again!
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As said above, this fits perfectly with the theme as well. It really brought a smile to my face.
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I'm glad my writing made you smile; your comments made me smile, haha. x3
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Teehee, yes, I can easily picture Mijumaru as being a shy Pokemon. x3
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But truthfully I still ended up enjoying it because the way you described and portrayed Black's thoughts along with Mijumaru's companionship is really unique, so I'm glad you managed to pull it off because I got a lot out of reading this C: Though at one part I thought your wording could have been better, ' “Tomorrow,” she says, after decades have passed.' sounds almost too literal, but it could just be me. Still, I really liked this, excellent work! Props for ( ... )
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I'm glad you got something out of it! And hm, true... I'll have to work on rephrasing that if I ever post this elsewhere. xD Thanks!
Teehee, I couldn't resist mentioning them, even in passing. <3 Thanks so so so much~!
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