Title: Summer Boy
Author:
teafortwelve (Tara)
Rating: G
Verse: Gen V, Gameverse.
Characters: Black/White
Summary: His summer ends when she leaves. It's as simple as that.
Author's Note: Comments and crits are loved. <3 This will probably be completely OOC for them when the games are released, but for now, just take their characterizations as my personal
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But truthfully I still ended up enjoying it because the way you described and portrayed Black's thoughts along with Mijumaru's companionship is really unique, so I'm glad you managed to pull it off because I got a lot out of reading this C: Though at one part I thought your wording could have been better, ' “Tomorrow,” she says, after decades have passed.' sounds almost too literal, but it could just be me. Still, I really liked this, excellent work! Props for including Cheren and Belle haha.
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I'm glad you got something out of it! And hm, true... I'll have to work on rephrasing that if I ever post this elsewhere. xD Thanks!
Teehee, I couldn't resist mentioning them, even in passing. <3 Thanks so so so much~!
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