Fic: If You Want Me (7/10)

[poetgirl925]

Author: Poetgirl925

Title: If You Want Me

Summary: Chloe steps outside her comfort zone while on an internship in Star City, California. Returning to Metropolis, she's determined to focus on her career while attempting to fix the mess her personal life is in. But just when things seem to be getting back to normal, Oliver Queen arrives in Metropolis

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I wanted to ...

[voz_76]

Punch Oliver myself after the way he treated Chloe ... Go Clark! Loved Chloe revealing she knew about Oiver's secret leather fetish - LOL! I was surprised that Oliver would give up so easily when he admitted the unique feelings he had for Chloe. Does this mean Hal's coming to visit?! I can't wait!!! I immediately smiled when I saw an update for this fic. Great AU, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Re: I wanted to ...

[poetgirl925]

It's late, but I just posted chapter 8. I moved and started a new job, so RL got kind of hectic for a while. We start to see the misunderstandings coming to light in the next couple of chapters, so I hope you enjoy the resolutions to the various plot points. And there is a lot of Hal in the next couple of chapters :)

[sophia_camile]

Shut up Clark, all this mess is your fault, if you just men up and tell that other girl that sorry I don't like you, Chloe shouldn't have to be in a fake relationship that is not even a relationship. I know that you're trying to be a good friend but you need to get all your facts right.

Ok, I had to stop reading take a minute and breathe or I was going to punch my laptop because this chapter was so full of emotions.

[poetgirl925]

And now I feel especially bad for making you wait so long! RL just got insanely busy for a while. But I just posted Chapter 8 and I'm editing 9 now, so this one is almost a wrap if you're still interested. Lots of resolutions coming in the next couple of chapters :)

[madlenita]

Thank you for new chapter!!!!
So Clark behavior was more like brother than boyfriend, at last in my opinion...
And it was amazing chapter Chloe/Oliver scene was so hot and sexy ;-)...
And later with their felling, it was so intense...
I really hope that next chapter will be more "happy" for both of them...
Thank you again...

[poetgirl925]

Well yes - Clark doesn't have real feelings for Chloe. So him going after Oliver was just his attempt to protect her feelings. I just posted Chapter 8 - not exactly happy and roses yet, but we have a lot of resolutions coming in the next couple of chapters. We're getting there! And sorry it took so long. I'm editing 9 now and I'll get it up soon as well

[ext_2064707]

Ahh! C'mon Chlollie...get it together! haha! Oh Clark, I love how he stands up for his best friend, though it would've been helpful for him to blurt out the fact that they weren't in a relationship before he punched Oliver, but hey..he's sticking up for his friend and figured Oliver didn't deserve an explanation. Awesome chapter!

[malugargula]

Wow Ollie must be so confused right now
And I LOVED how Clark defended Chloe
Can't wait to read more