{series} Empire of Midnight: don't flutter by

[phantomizedacid]

don't flutter by
→ Jonghyun/Key, Onew/Minho, Minho/Taemin; PG-16
He lands in your heart, not a second late.
thanks siaht for the help & jecca-o9 for the beta :D

Comments

[miximel]

AHHHHHH BRB READING

[miximel]

OKAY. ugh. this was so good. I loved it. idek. Your Jonghyun and Key are perfect as usual, and I really loved Minho, Taemin, and Onew..I want to know more about Minho, so I hope you do write that side story. <3 oh and of course I loved the sexy club part sflkjsmndg so hot, so hot. *________*

[ontokki]

~♥♥♥♥~ your comments always make me smile :(
I hope I 'inspired' you with my short club scene ~o~
/gets to writing vamp!Minho
I'M SORRY IT ENDED BEFORE SEX. This was getting too long and complicated lol
ilu2 ;~;

[miximel]

DD: I feel like crap because my review was so short but I really did love it so much skfjesdklf I'm just tired. :( LOL you definitely did, I'll have to start writing that part soon - I hope I can make it half as hot as this was.

vamp!minho is gonna be angsty isn't it? *_* I usually don't like angst, but minho looks so hot when he's all ~serious~ and sexy-like. excited klsfjalk

OMG LOL NO IT'S OKAY~ I love how it ended with a simple “Let’s fuck.” unffff jjong bb. T-T

♥

[hp_groupie]

OMG ME TOO!

[jecca_o9]

I love it when you write like this, simple and easy but there are underlying issues behind it that makes it deeper. It hits. T_T♥ Minho's affection for Jonghyun and then Taemin and Jinki's for Minho. T____T

Stalker!Vampire Jonghyun is so funny to imagine. :,D

And yes omg Minho side storyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy. Or you could drabble the Jongkey photoshoot.

[ontokki]

lshfsafsalf thank you ;_;
I was so worried that I made it too complicated ~o~

haha it is. He's all like 'I'm so cool' but then he's stalking Key XD

I didn't even think about the photoshoot. Alright, I'll do both 8D

thanks again D:

[hp_groupie]

OMG...TELL ME THERE'S A PART TWO...PPPPLLLLEEEAAASSSEEE TELL ME THERE'S A PART TWO. D:

Okay...now to review: Onew is adorkable...and a little deluded. XD

“Mr. Sandwich, why are you so tasty? What did Jonghyun put in you?”

Taemin is...well...Taemin. And omg...don't make him a food source...HE COULD DIE! XD The boy is small enough already.

Minho is kind of hot when he's brooding and horny for Jjong. NGL. I want a back/side story...thank you.

And Jonghyun's obsessed and forever horny. /stalker But I love it.

“Now,” Jonghyun looks up at Kibum whose face is flushed red. “Let’s fuck.”

INDEED! ....so keep writing! >:O

[ontokki]

The-there's a side story D:

Onew was so fun to write omg. I can tease him for ages.
And bingo, Taemin could die. You caught onto something that will be revealed in Minho's story :D
I will write it then! I'm kinda excited to write vamp!Minho, all demanding and stuff lol
kekekeke
omg I will one day. maybe. ok XD

[hp_groupie]

:DDDD

[lamentedrhyme]

This was so good.

The piano room scene was sweet and a bit hot. And the club scene was like.. WHOA. LOL

“Mr. Sandwich, why are you so tasty? What did Jonghyun put in you?”

And Onew. Hahaha Onew, I just can't even.. that dunderhead. XDD

Minho feeds on Taemin? Poor kid, looked like he was getting pretty sick. I was focusing too much on the JongKey to comprehend the 2Min. LOL

And the end was depriving. XDD

Cool if you're gonna write a side story for Minho :D

[ontokki]

Oh Onew's just so cute when he's like that.
Yeah, Minho feeds on Taemin, sometimes.
It was, sorry Dx
Thanks for reading :D

[lamentedrhyme]

If I ever see Onew talking to a sandwich one day. I'd want to poke him forever. LMAO

And Taemin enjoys being fed upon? Oh and so does Key ROFL

No prob :D